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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out? She's based on a lionfish |
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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^; though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D looking good btw! i like the concept :> |
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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol
awooo said:
She sorta looks scary
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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something
swiftystarss said:
maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^; though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D looking good btw! i like the concept :>
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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art. |
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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face. |
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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms... Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have! I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3 |
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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2 |
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I like this a lot more! Her arms don't look nearly as stretched out, which (in my opinion) makes the rest of her body look a lot more proportional and less wonky! Plus the lineart and fin detailing helped a lot. |
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