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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt. Feel free to redline! Attempt 1 
Attempt 2 
Attempt 3 
All (c) 243831/ Me I have figured it out uwuwu thank you 
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ok so the last attempt looks great! the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body? the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also |
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Game Moderator
Darkseeker
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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork. |
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Darkseeker
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Please do
Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS! You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art). In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful. You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol. I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist. 
Redline: (c)Nezitystudio |
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Darkseeker
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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much! That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that |
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