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07:35:14 Archive

ohhh thanks Bearlow I couldn't tell

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You get mushrooms

07:33:59 Archive

Did any of y'all get something, as the game news said?

07:17:40 mika - they/it/he

marry christmas everybody <3

07:15:54 Star, not leaving

Merry Christmas!

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Merry Christmas everybody!!

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Merry Christmas everyone.

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Merry christmas yall

06:36:50 Vi, Echo, Aria

Pvp anyone?

05:40:57 Caol (he/him)

hammy chrimis

05:03:50 Pack of Sharp Snap

Vana
I have one wolf at 68 hours of pregnancy so either I will or won't get a Christmas litter in the end

05:01:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

I thought I managed to avoid the holiday cards

04:58:24 Vana

Fei
That's fair. Well I only got one decent pup which was a DH+hero so I can't complain XD
But it's 5 am and I'm waiting for my brother to wake up so I can get the presents over with..

04:56:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

Vana
No, I decided not to in the end. Didn't want to risk losing any litters in ant puppy booms

Monkshood Tribe

04:56:03 Purple

Would there be a reason why I could discover NPCs in explore to hunt and battle, but not have the pop up links or dialogue show? I ended my explore tab and started another. Unfortunately didn't seem to help though.

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Fei
Merry Christmas! Did you get/try for any Christmas Litters? My last female delivered 15 minutes before midnight.

04:50:23 Misty

Nirvana Sky,
how about Krampus's Revenge?

04:49:08 Pack of Sharp Snap

Merry Christmas Vana

04:48:08 Vana

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May 11, 2020 04:00 PM

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[c]157083

BOOM

ANOTHER ONE

Alright, leave the black lined one I'm happy with that. Please just help with the red one.

This thread has indeed been reused.

Edited at July 9, 2020 02:33 PM by Eternity

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May 11, 2020 04:04 PM

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It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:05 PM by Deceit

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May 11, 2020 04:06 PM

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Deceit said:

It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Thanks! I'll consider adding some fluff on the legs.

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May 11, 2020 04:07 PM

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I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

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May 11, 2020 04:09 PM

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Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:11 PM by Reathmuaz

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May 11, 2020 04:11 PM

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Sabbath said:

I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

Thank you! :D That's super helpful-

I've added one with altered back legs now, so hopefully, that improves the perspective?
Thanks! I like the tail too- well, I like the concept--

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May 11, 2020 04:13 PM

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Reathmuaz said:

Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

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(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Thank you-

That's deffo helpful. I'm gonna put him a little on the skinnier side, but that picture illustrates the base stuff I need to follow like,,, a lot-

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:13 PM by Eternity

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May 11, 2020 04:42 PM

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From considering my own style-

idk if it will help at all-

bring the chest a little lower down. Like just pull the sternum a little lower and round it. Then like Reath said, those shoulders and hips *^* also agreeing with Sabbath lol (I'm sorry I piggybacked-)

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May 11, 2020 04:51 PM

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Thanks Bro! <3

I'm honestly giving up with this lowered head to come back to on a later date, I'll raise the head up instead as I'm more confident with that. :')

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May 11, 2020 05:00 PM

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I agree with others on the left bAck leg, it looks off.

The head also look weirdly small too me. But that might be because my drawings have say too big heads

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