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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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