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I was just messing around and I made this: https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png And this: https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background I'm just looking for advice and stuff. |
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Horse I can't see it But the D ring for your bit is way too big And the rest of the bridle is way to small |
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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this. https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png
Or https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png (Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)
Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.
For the horse: Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.
Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this: https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png
I would possibly work on mane a bit too. There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.
However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^ |
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Thanks Astro and Midnight! The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter. I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD |
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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job! |
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