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 kycantina
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Amy, LMAO every time I find one I think of you <3
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I like the Jade Monkey!
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I just found my nemesis, the one and only...jade monkey
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Cloud

You can buy them with IRL money (Realm > Marketplace > Barter > Apples)

Or with mush from other players (same place but Barter > Search)

Sometimes, if you do art/writing/etc. you can do that for apples as well.
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i need help how do i earn apples!
 kycantina
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is hunting 100 squirrels for 300 mush worth it?
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Hallow,
I have chronic migraines too. My momma used to call 'em "Sick Dying Headaches". Bad weather, hormones, forget to eat? Bham! Like a knife to the skull. They suck, I hope your SO gets your meds to you soon. :(
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Ouch my wallet
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I just paid my power bill >>
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having found five mushrooms, ten mushrooms, three mushrooms, fifteen mushrooms and zero mushrooms count all at 2 at the same time for mushroom hunt is stressful.
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Crypto

Trust me, I am trying to decide if I want to keep her or not, she's beautiful 0-0
 Creepy Currency
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Eevee, her red is just *^*
 Hallow's Eve
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Speaking of red markings, look how pretty she is!
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Yippie my alpha female is in labor!
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den spaces splurge it is, thanks ^^
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Bleak

I already have my daith pierced, because of migraines. I just kind of have to deal with it. The Daith piercing makes it better so I can tolerate it
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I keep forgetting game time is an hour behind my time.
I was so confused why my raffle didn't start and then I realized the time was different
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I love my new avatar <3
 Creepy Currency
02:21:44 Tag (he/they)
...one of his pups doesn't have red markings-
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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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