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 Hallow's Eve
02:16:11 Hallow, Eve
I need my boyfriend to get back so I can get some pain medicine, I got a migriane
 Caeruleum
02:15:44 Cae, Blue
oh my God thank you for reminding me of my monthly fuyu no hanashi obsession *^* time to loop it on repeat for 4 days straight
 kycantina
02:15:15 no. 1 swamp defender
Saph, yes go ahead!!
 kycantina
02:14:57 no. 1 swamp defender
sometimes it works too well which is how Cae and I ended up with like 100 DH pups
 Saphire
02:14:22 Phire/ Saph
ky
haha ok thank you ill try. also, can i send you a friend request?
 kycantina
02:13:55 no. 1 swamp defender
Saph, I mean,, if you complain and explore enough you'll find one eventually
 Amygdala
02:13:24 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
Also i started watching given, i have been sleeping on a masterpiece
 Amygdala
02:12:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
Nice, then i need to complain some more XD

Give me more grendeki and mothers
 Caeruleum
02:12:56 Cae, Blue
do not doubt the Power of Complaining, mortal
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:12:46 You're just yellow
-WP Click-

:)
 Saphire
02:11:53 Phire/ Saph
Ky
haha, ok, does that actually work?
 Rogue Turkey
02:10:55 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Caeruleum
02:08:44 Cae, Blue
amy, it works for 20 steps regardless of teams :D
also, complaining does work, how dare you doubt it XD
 Creepy Currency
02:05:14 Tag (he/they)
inferno, ulfr was the BEST dye added. second only to bloodborne
 Amygdala
02:05:06 Amy/Anpmygdala
Lmao
Firdt grendreki now grendel's mother XD
 kycantina
02:03:11 no. 1 swamp defender
Saph, complain about how you can't find them in chat then immediately go explore, power of complaining works 25% of the time
 Inferno Abyss
02:03:01 Raven, Flame
. . .I was not expecting you but I'll take you xD
-WP Click-
 Amygdala
02:02:27 Amy/Anpmygdala
Of you use the wreath for no flee does it work if i change my team? The one i am using got destroyed by grendeki (guess complaining works XD)
 Saphire
02:01:43 Phire/ Saph
chat how do i find nordic warriors
 Amygdala
02:00:51 Amy/Anpmygdala
Plane
No thanks, i neet the mothers too :p

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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