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07:46:19 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Feiella
I personally would love a ferret with all my heart. But my parents are still ver my much a deadset hard absolutely no to that.
My lap buddy will be a Shih Tzu, (toy) Shih Poo or a different Shih Tzu mix. Most likely the second or first of those though. It won't happen until Bear is gone either because we wouldn't be able to manage four dogs again. It's going to be trained as my service dog once I get the pup
 Feiella
07:46:04 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood
Living a chaotic life and I've become a bed now
 Urux
07:45:17 Urox, Uris
-Click-
So close to finishing :')
 Apothecary
07:44:35 Medicinally Autistic
Nah, burn the whole building down boeing. It's the best choice.
 Boeing
07:44:10 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Apothecary
e.e
just... I don't know. But I'd reccommend thinking it through a bit. like I get your reaction, it's understandable-
damn, I don't know though :')
 Nightwood
07:43:47 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Feiella,

I'm doing alright, how are you?
 Feiella
07:42:51 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood
how are you?
 Apothecary
07:42:47 Medicinally Autistic
Y'all can't keep scaring me like this.
 Apothecary
07:42:36 Medicinally Autistic
And more sales in main chat making me think I'm in the wrong chat.
 Feiella
07:42:25 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Forest whisp
Please take it to sales chat
 Apothecary
07:41:42 Medicinally Autistic
Anyway, off to the forest I go, I gotta BE train before going back to mountains tomorrow.
 Nightwood
07:41:25 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Feiella,

Hi! It's been a while ^^
 Apothecary
07:41:10 Medicinally Autistic
Listen. The thought of burning my stuff right now is the only thing keeping me from exploding.
 Feiella
07:40:06 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood!
 Boeing
07:39:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Apothecary
- yeah. I don't know but ack
your reaction isn't wrong. I'd probably do something along those lines too
but don't burn your stuff >.>
 Apothecary
07:39:56 Medicinally Autistic
@Magnus

What would the revenge be?

I mean my revenge was just moving on, but like seriously, this feels gross. dude did not contribute enough to cheat on me in my own apartment.
 Feiella
07:39:08 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Desti
You will end up with the perfect lap buddy be dog, cat or something else
 Apothecary
07:38:44 Medicinally Autistic
I am gonna go take a bath in acid to get off any remaining germs.
 Forest whisp
07:38:28 She /her/ daughter/
I low-key forgot my password for a second
 Magnus Bane
07:38:22 Mag/Maggy
The way I'd get the best revenge for cheating on me in my own bed:')

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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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