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09:37:22 Dogg :>

Made myself a new pfp
-Click-

kept it pretty simple

09:37:01 Cae, Blue

Friendo, its past 4:30am :')

09:36:25 Medicinally Autistic

Time for me to finally finish cleaning for my apartment inspectionnnn

It's gonna look so magnificent, I really hope they love it.

09:35:47 ♰ Vapor ♰

Besto

Oh god, isn't it late for you? LOL

09:33:26 Cae, Blue

If i try to get a quick shut eye, i just know all 10+ girls would pop at the same time e.e

09:20:49 Mag/Maggy

Fuck j realized it was a male :')

09:19:08 Rook

Mother of Dragons
first wolf with vulpes base thats actually pretty omg

09:18:54 Trying to BE train

You spy 5 Sun Bears.
Ah fuck, and I ran into zero on the previous level, but I guess now I can get bent >.>

09:18:22 Cy, love

Stop tormenting me. Just pop already
-WP Click-

09:18:06 Mistclaw

I totally would, Mag! :3

09:17:32 Mag/Maggy

-WP Click-
Keep?

09:15:38 Rook

Nobachey
he piss color

09:15:10

Sabbath
Why did you name him pissboy? Haha

09:11:15 Novak

Cae

also no problem! Happy to help!

09:10:26 Novak

Cae

Put 30 CP into composure for ya!

09:01:00 Moon

-WP Click-
look at my newest lady :) pockets hurt but im absolutely beaming

08:57:59 Cae, Blue

autumn, may they all leave me alone and go to you

08:57:40 Cae, Blue

friendo, i ignore them lmao

08:56:51 Trying to BE train

GRAHH the only elephants I've seen apart from the 5 that paired with Grendel are the ones you can sneak by for an item, this sucks, and now I'm putting BE training on halt for this >.<

08:55:39 ♰ Vapor ♰

Besto

Mm elephante time! Good luck, I think(?)

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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