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[c]157083 BOOM ANOTHER ONE
Alright, leave the black lined one I'm happy with that. Please just help with the red one.
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It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare. |
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Deceit said:
It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.
Thanks! I'll consider adding some fluff on the legs. |
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I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective. I love the tail btw |
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Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense? Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense. |
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Sabbath said:
I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective. I love the tail btw
Thank you! :D That's super helpful- I've added one with altered back legs now, so hopefully, that improves the perspective?
Thanks! I like the tail too- well, I like the concept-- |
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Reathmuaz said:
Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense? -snip- Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.
Thank you- That's deffo helpful. I'm gonna put him a little on the skinnier side, but that picture illustrates the base stuff I need to follow like,,, a lot- |
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From considering my own style- idk if it will help at all- bring the chest a little lower down. Like just pull the sternum a little lower and round it. Then like Reath said, those shoulders and hips *^* also agreeing with Sabbath lol (I'm sorry I piggybacked-) |
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Thanks Bro! <3 I'm honestly giving up with this lowered head to come back to on a later date, I'll raise the head up instead as I'm more confident with that. :') |
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I agree with others on the left bAck leg, it looks off. The head also look weirdly small too me. But that might be because my drawings have say too big heads |
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