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 Enigma
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Ah yes. Something about this place keeps calling you back. As time wears on, who knows! One day I will inevitably forget to reactivate my account. And one day, WP will become as a memory
 The Pumpkin King
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Someday, in typical WolfPlayer fashion, you'll have to very dramatically come back and say hi. :-)
 Enigma
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It's been such a long time since I've been called that... feels right. Will miss you too <3
 The Pumpkin King
02:21:31 
Will miss you, Swan,,
 The Pumpkin King
02:21:23 
Waaa. My mention at the very end. waa
 Enigma
02:18:48 
And, with the completion of my bio, that is it. My time here is up.

To my friends who happen to be here in chat, I am grateful to have gotten to know you. Farewell, and I hope you enjoy your journey down the stream of life <3
 The Pumpkin King
02:17:48 
I was tired at 8:30 but here I am, 1 AM... scrolling through adoptable dogs near me...
 The Garage
02:12:05 Stoned Panda
CouldnÂ’t*
 Anxiety
02:10:38 ancient as hell
oh no worries at all, it happens :)
 The Garage
02:10:10 Stoned Panda
Anxiety

I am so sorry- I was offline for the PvP and circuit to take my pack off the list. Sorry to keep you waiting! IÂ’ll post fur PvP again 🖤
 Porcelain
02:05:10 
i use my blogs for great purposes such as "guides im too afraid to post on forums"
 technoblade
01:44:29 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

I used to upload like once a week back when I was writing a lot, i should try to do that again.
 Red River Wolves
01:42:38 Redd Dead
Techno,
Huh. Somehow, it never registered in my brain that you have a blog. It might be that the blog link blends in on most palettes for me
 technoblade
01:37:04 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

Their lore is on here actually, in my blog, like 50% of my blog is them.
 Red River Wolves
01:35:44 Redd Dead
Techno,
I found Alastair and then went through literally every folder until I found Jumper... I don't think I'm awake enough to read through the lore yet, but I'm going to assume it's great
 technoblade
01:31:07 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

The main developed things I have are my favourite couple Alastair and Jumper, the reapers and the Syndicate in my main world.
 Red River Wolves
01:30:10 Redd Dead
Techno,
I really need to tear myself away from PvP and explore and just read through your stuff. And write my own stuff. And do other real life things I've been neglecting. So much to do
 technoblade
01:27:41 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

Yeah those are the sisters Storyteller or Fate and then Wisdom. Both of them are the guardians of my version of earth.

And i will make more once I finish obsessing over my reaper army
 Defiant Rescue
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*-* i don't wanna wait. -WP Click-
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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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