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 Amygdala
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Anyone up for pvp
 Enigma
02:30:08 
Ah yes. Something about this place keeps calling you back. As time wears on, who knows! One day I will inevitably forget to reactivate my account. And one day, WP will become as a memory
 The Pumpkin King
02:27:04 
Someday, in typical WolfPlayer fashion, you'll have to very dramatically come back and say hi. :-)
 Enigma
02:25:49 
It's been such a long time since I've been called that... feels right. Will miss you too <3
 The Pumpkin King
02:21:31 
Will miss you, Swan,,
 The Pumpkin King
02:21:23 
Waaa. My mention at the very end. waa
 Enigma
02:18:48 
And, with the completion of my bio, that is it. My time here is up.

To my friends who happen to be here in chat, I am grateful to have gotten to know you. Farewell, and I hope you enjoy your journey down the stream of life <3
 The Pumpkin King
02:17:48 
I was tired at 8:30 but here I am, 1 AM... scrolling through adoptable dogs near me...
 The Garage
02:12:05 Stoned Panda
CouldnÂ’t*
 Anxiety
02:10:38 ancient as hell
oh no worries at all, it happens :)
 The Garage
02:10:10 Stoned Panda
Anxiety

I am so sorry- I was offline for the PvP and circuit to take my pack off the list. Sorry to keep you waiting! IÂ’ll post fur PvP again 🖤
 Porcelain
02:05:10 
i use my blogs for great purposes such as "guides im too afraid to post on forums"
 technoblade
01:44:29 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

I used to upload like once a week back when I was writing a lot, i should try to do that again.
 Red River Wolves
01:42:38 Redd Dead
Techno,
Huh. Somehow, it never registered in my brain that you have a blog. It might be that the blog link blends in on most palettes for me
 technoblade
01:37:04 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

Their lore is on here actually, in my blog, like 50% of my blog is them.
 Red River Wolves
01:35:44 Redd Dead
Techno,
I found Alastair and then went through literally every folder until I found Jumper... I don't think I'm awake enough to read through the lore yet, but I'm going to assume it's great
 technoblade
01:31:07 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

The main developed things I have are my favourite couple Alastair and Jumper, the reapers and the Syndicate in my main world.
 Red River Wolves
01:30:10 Redd Dead
Techno,
I really need to tear myself away from PvP and explore and just read through your stuff. And write my own stuff. And do other real life things I've been neglecting. So much to do
 technoblade
01:27:41 Lil Techy | Techno
Redd

Yeah those are the sisters Storyteller or Fate and then Wisdom. Both of them are the guardians of my version of earth.

And i will make more once I finish obsessing over my reaper army
 Defiant Rescue
01:26:24 Alex//Chim Hoarder
*-* i don't wanna wait. -WP Click-

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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