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 BooJake
12:32:22 Don't call me BJ.
Other theme is back up <3
 Spookybeast
12:32:14 Will
@Silver

Not Warrior cars lmao 😭

I love that I canÂ’t live that down
 Spookybeast
12:31:41 Will
@Vox

My iPad hates your name, sorry 😔
 SpookyMountain
12:31:30 Silver/Pyro/Luna
Jake
Just 'Silver' or an insane remix of my name for ya!
 Urux
12:31:00 Urox
BooJake
I like it ^^ I love the pink to be honest
 BooJake
12:30:29 Don't call me BJ.
@SpookyMountain
I'll change back
:(
 Ámor
12:30:29 On haitus
@Vox
im good, im tired plus i love the rp i just made *^*
 SpookyMountain
12:30:01 Silver/Pyro/Luna
I miss the old one
 Urux
12:30:01 Urox
Hi chat :P
 SpookyMountain
12:29:53 Silver/Pyro/Luna
::
 SpookyMountain
12:29:49 Silver/Pyro/Luna
Umm.. this is different Jake:(
 Ámor
12:29:48 On haitus
@Vox
I... when did you wake up??
 Voxtexy
12:29:22 Vox
Dudeee, I can make Jethro... buuut I just fucked around and I am liking the idea of my vitiligo lad being my character. He's just too pretty when I make him in the game
 Voxtexy
12:28:33 Vox
Ámor,
I'm alright! Scared the out of myself on Friday when I slept in the entire work day, no one knew I was gone so like- ajdshd, they didn't bother to see where I was. I was dead when they told me that lmaoo

How're you doin'?
 BooJake
12:28:20 Don't call me BJ.
so
I changed my palette a litte, went for a new theme, thoughts?
'-'
 Ámor
12:28:10 On haitus
When an man-made disease takes over the country, colonies are made. Can the survivors of the disease work together to make a cure? Or will they die trying? Check out the new roleplay, I Am Survivor!
-WP Click-
 SpookyMountain
12:28:06 Silver/Pyro/Luna
Hey vox
 SpookyMountain
12:27:54 Silver/Pyro/Luna
Warrior cars
I suffer the same thing with auto correct
 Voxtexy
12:27:43 Vox
PFF, I've been doubled boxed lmaoo
 Cypress Road
12:27:15 Cy, love
Where did sweet potato go?

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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