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Okay look here--/j

I like my feathers XD
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05:08:49 Redd Dead
WP but everything is a little to the left. Literally.
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Chro
lets add a chatbox and a marketplace, and gear to put on the wolves
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05:08:23 Will
Omg imagine if we gave people the opportunity to pick a faction?
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05:08:22 Chro (he/him)
Pft half the wolves on here are winged nowadays lol
 Zeraphia
05:07:53 Vah is Spooky
Make it winged wolves just to be "different" XD
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Omg yes, and what about forums? It's all coming together
 Luna👻
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Chro
nobody has ever thought of that one before XD we can add mini games and exploring
 Polargeist
05:05:18 Chro (he/him)
Guys I have a great idea what if we make an online simulator game about wolves
 Zeraphia
05:03:17 Vah is Spooky
Might as well make our own everything at this point XD
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if anyone sees mu wolves in explore pm me
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05:02:52 Silver (She/her)
oh wait its a new season!
 Feiella
05:02:33 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Pass. Life is chaotic as is
 Luna👻
05:01:52 Silver (She/her)
the hosting sites are overwhelmed with all the WP people uploading art 24/7 XD
 Revelry
05:01:50 Rev
Should I make a gallery for dumb low quality pics of my dog?
 Spookybeast
05:01:32 Will
@Chro

Omg I'm joining lol
 Luna👻
05:01:28 Silver (She/her)
Chro
oh yes please XD
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05:01:04 Chro (he/him)
We gotta make our own hosting site soon at this point. Who's with me guys
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@Etea

Omg
They hate us 😭
 Luna👻
05:00:36 Silver (She/her)
ET
but I did this -Click- honestly, I don't really like how this one turned out its supposed to be a winter palette

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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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