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 teddy
03:45:05 its yellow
i know,, such nostalgia. I dont know why eve changed the font, i remember people wanting it back
 los campesinos!
03:44:29 they them
oh my gosh the old.... i dont know what its called the headings
 teddy
03:44:09 its yellow
and no i've never won the wolves game
 teddy
03:43:40 its yellow
here we are
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 teddy
03:40:56 its yellow
waitt omg i've unearthed a screenshot from 2015
 distant-screams
03:38:48 katy | beetle
i miss the old mushroom <3 such a cute lil icon
 teddy
03:38:45 its yellow
let me know if you ever find it heh
 teddy
03:38:31 its yellow
aahhh its so cute!!
 distant-screams
03:38:27 katy | beetle
finish* lol
 Eternity
03:37:10 ET
Teddy
Look, the old mushroom too :]
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And I did somewhere, god.
 distant-screams
03:36:54 katy | beetle
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paws? i really need to finishing maxing her CP eventually
 Jaedewolves
03:36:15 
Ooh got it
 distant-screams
03:35:49 katy | beetle
Jaede,
pretty much makes the wolf greyscale instead of whatever colors their base coat / markings originally were.
 teddy
03:35:36 its yellow
on another tangent, i found the original apple in the page coding

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also does anyone have screenshots of old wolfplay? specifically the olf font that used to be the headlines
 teddy
03:34:51 its yellow
jaede
makes black and white i think!
 Jaedewolves
03:34:12 
What does the Axanthic defect do?
 teddy
03:31:20 its yellow
distant
ah great! thank you!
 distant-screams
03:30:46 katy | beetle
yeah here you go teddy ^^

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 teddy
03:29:55 its yellow
uhh we euros never win
 teddy
03:29:35 its yellow
oh i see, it was a commission! so not from me

distant, could you be able to put it on imgbb? no worries if you dont have the dtime!

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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