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 teddy
03:31:20 its yellow
distant
ah great! thank you!
 distant-screams
03:30:46 katy | beetle
yeah here you go teddy ^^

-Click-
 teddy
03:29:55 its yellow
uhh we euros never win
 teddy
03:29:35 its yellow
oh i see, it was a commission! so not from me

distant, could you be able to put it on imgbb? no worries if you dont have the dtime!
 Eternity
03:29:05 ET
postimg said fuck you to the europeans again I guess
 distant-screams
03:28:41 katy | beetle
postimg is under maintenance though.. again e.e
 Eternity
03:28:17 ET
teddy
Yeah no, postimg is definitely down. Try imgbb maybe?
 distant-screams
03:27:53 katy | beetle
teddy,
i'm able to see it
 teddy
03:27:48 its yellow
ok thank youu
 Mount Lambda
03:27:00 Lambda
yeah, like honey indeed Zefhyr :)
It doesn't load for me, teddy
 teddy
03:26:25 its yellow
for me it just wont load
 teddy
03:26:11 its yellow
hey dos this link show up with an image for you guuys? -Click-
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
03:25:36 
kinda like a bit'o'honey
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
03:24:54 
oh thats not so bad lambda!
 Mount Lambda
03:23:40 Lambda
-WP Click-
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
03:23:11 
any examples?
 Mount Lambda
03:23:04 Lambda
ohhh i found them, i honestly love the coat xd
 The NightClan
03:22:56 Wolfy, Night
Believe*
 The NightClan
03:22:43 Wolfy, Night
Lambda
I believen that flax is a coat
 los campesinos!
03:21:58 they them
its a pelt colour in the game

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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