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 teddy
07:55:30 its yellow
thank you amy
i will do so

bye
 Amygdala
07:54:45 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Go and paint
 Amygdala
07:54:32 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ecifircas
Did you finish the quest?

If not i can pvp again
 teddy
07:53:52 its yellow
someone command me to go and paint
 Revelry
07:53:15 Rev
No thoughts, head empty
-Click-
 The Pumpkin King
07:50:39 
001, lost 41 mush to play those matches. Very sweet of you, thanks.
 Eternity
07:48:53 ET
That's my three pvps for the year done, no one will ever see me pvp ever again LOL
 Eternity
07:40:33 ET
:D
 Urux
07:38:00 Urox
D: Sorry Rev! I didn't see the boost thing. I'll be quick :')
 The Pumpkin King
07:37:47 
Gotcha.
 Revelry
07:37:12 Rev
Eci, if you need more help, please put boost matches
 The Pumpkin King
07:36:41 
6/15 matches won. lol
 Amygdala
07:31:54 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ecifircas
I can't belive maze is a good battler. He is not even on DG yet XD
 Eternity
07:31:47 ET
Omg. We're on different networks again, PVP me
 The Pumpkin King
07:31:07 
Yeah, Maze of Memories and Arrax have both beat Shame. before, if I remember right.
 Amygdala
07:28:37 Amy/Anpmygdala
Hehe arrax doesn't dissapoint XD
 Urux
07:28:35 Urox
Damn, I should have kept her on DG. I switched to dodge lol
 The Pumpkin King
07:28:29 
Ooh, good win. :-D
 The Pumpkin King
07:26:22 
Urux, baha, never feel bad. I think Shame has only ever lost like... 4x. He needs the beating. <|3
 The Pumpkin King
07:25:46 
Revelry, bless you ;; <3

Urux, good game. ^^

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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