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 starmutt
03:49:21 marsh | they/it
could check wayback machine for some stuff :o
 Karou
03:49:21 
i forgot it even looked like that lol
 teddy
03:45:05 its yellow
i know,, such nostalgia. I dont know why eve changed the font, i remember people wanting it back
 los campesinos!
03:44:29 they them
oh my gosh the old.... i dont know what its called the headings
 teddy
03:44:09 its yellow
and no i've never won the wolves game
 teddy
03:43:40 its yellow
here we are
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 teddy
03:40:56 its yellow
waitt omg i've unearthed a screenshot from 2015
 distant-screams
03:38:48 katy | beetle
i miss the old mushroom <3 such a cute lil icon
 teddy
03:38:45 its yellow
let me know if you ever find it heh
 teddy
03:38:31 its yellow
aahhh its so cute!!
 distant-screams
03:38:27 katy | beetle
finish* lol
 Eternity
03:37:10 ET
Teddy
Look, the old mushroom too :]
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And I did somewhere, god.
 distant-screams
03:36:54 katy | beetle
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paws? i really need to finishing maxing her CP eventually
 Jaedewolves
03:36:15 
Ooh got it
 distant-screams
03:35:49 katy | beetle
Jaede,
pretty much makes the wolf greyscale instead of whatever colors their base coat / markings originally were.
 teddy
03:35:36 its yellow
on another tangent, i found the original apple in the page coding

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also does anyone have screenshots of old wolfplay? specifically the olf font that used to be the headlines
 teddy
03:34:51 its yellow
jaede
makes black and white i think!
 Jaedewolves
03:34:12 
What does the Axanthic defect do?
 teddy
03:31:20 its yellow
distant
ah great! thank you!
 distant-screams
03:30:46 katy | beetle
yeah here you go teddy ^^

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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