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 Jack-A-Boo
12:49:40 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Vah

I know XD I just rarely have time to practice drawing
 Jack-A-Boo
12:49:15 Jack, Boo, Vapor
gods I'm not ready for the morning
 Zeraphia
12:43:56 Vah is less okay
Boo

That's normal honestly. But you just gotta focus on doodling and drawing more to get better. :3
 Jack-A-Boo
12:41:42 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Vah

I wish you luck on your interview
 Jack-A-Boo
12:40:55 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Vah

I always end up hating on my art after a while I have a feeling I will end up hating this guy soon enough if I keep staring at him looking for flaws
 Zeraphia
12:39:25 Vah is less okay
Boo

You'd think so. But honestly it isn't. XD front facing bodies? Yeah. Front facing faces? Nah.

Side profile face? Oh beautiful.

Side body? ... slow down--

Dogg

Thanks! Imma need it XD
 Jack-A-Boo
12:38:37 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Vah

you would think front facing would be easy to draw XD
 DoggPuk3
12:38:36 Dogg :>
Zera
Oh! good luck with the interview
 DoggPuk3
12:38:07 Dogg :>
I will def do that once I create my avatar banner XD
I plan to do a pixelated animation for it
 Zeraphia
12:37:59 Vah is less okay
I might open up one this week. It all depends on how the interview tomorrow goes. ;-;
 DoggPuk3
12:37:23 Dogg :>
ooo true true that is smart
 Zeraphia
12:36:28 Vah is less okay
Dogg

Could always do art auction to see what you can get!
 DoggPuk3
12:35:30 Dogg :>
Im thinking of opening up some commissions on here for Apples, I dont have the money at the moment to purchase any and I desperately need more den space
 Jack-A-Boo
12:35:23 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Dave The Magical Cheese Wizard flirts with Please dont call me Ugly .

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gay wolves XD
 Frozen Flowers
12:34:56 Dagon/Sheo/Moor
What gear do you all suggest?
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
12:34:41 Vah is less okay
Boo

Oh man, I feel that. Front facing is freakishly difficult.
 Jack-A-Boo
12:34:11 Jack, Boo, Vapor
rip to the fact I cant draw him front facing
 Luna🍂
12:33:55 Silver (She/her)
Myrkyr) sniffs under a bush and finds Greenhouse!
Someone tell me how the Hell a greenhouse get under a bush and how Myrkyr had to smell it and couldnÂ’t just see it? ItÂ’s a building itÂ’s sorta obvious
 DoggPuk3
12:33:05 Dogg :>
Okay thats what I thought but wanted to be sure, Im super excited now
 Zeraphia
12:33:01 Vah is less okay
Boo

Honestly go for it! It definitely can't hurt.

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Critique?August 24, 2018 04:29 PM


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Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:40 PM


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It's so cute :0
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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TheAlphaPack said:
Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

Ooh good idea, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so itÂ’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

ThatÂ’s it I hoped I helped
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:51 PM


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starwolfs said:
It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped


You definitely did, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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That's beautiful! And really cute :D
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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The frosting and the cherry seem to be layered pretty weirdly? Maybe try to make them look like they're each sitting on top of the other rather than behind it. ^^ I absolutely adore how you did the hedgehog though! :'D
Critique?August 24, 2018 05:01 PM


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The bottom half almost looks like it's in front of the quills on the top. Maybe make the quills that overlap the lighter half of the porcupine a bit longer, so that it's clear that the front half isn't sticking out in a way.

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