Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

10:18:35

Since my oc is a God of Winter I'm gonna have to have a winter themed palette so my palette will also be a flash bang

Serpents

10:18:19 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

when you get the event wolf pelt it says right? and all levels ?

Existence

10:17:29 Exist / Kuskyn

Hehe Time for the flames <3 Test out how well my lasso fill tool works for me

10:17:00 katy | beetle

ET,
also your palette is gorgeous; i'm just used to everything i have being on dark mode xD

i think i'm gonna try to put out a few premades, then work on finishing that sketch of distant. need something to do while i'm up and unable to sleep, lol

10:16:26

I hope I get my laptop back tomorrow

10:15:54 ET

Yes, making them on a laptop is much easier.

10:15:37 ET

Beetle
Distant definitely needs more art then, omg. You really should! :0

Mythology
Making palettes really is tedious </3 I didn't know anything about CSS until using WP

10:14:58

Are palettes easier to make on a laptop then on a phone? Color wise , cause my phone is making it difficult

10:14:42 katy | beetle

ET,
aa thank you! <3

i realized a few days ago that my poor boy distant only has like 3-4 fullbody pieces; so i'm gonna draw him a little something :)

10:14:14

Distant

That looks cool I love your art style

10:13:34 ET

LMAO SORRYYY
Sorry, I hope the spinning makes up for the blindness

10:13:25

ET

I'm currently struggling with making a palette

10:13:07 ET

Beetle
Omg, that looks awesome! :0
The legs look perfect *^* you draw em so well

10:12:48 katy | beetle

oh god i forgot about ET's flashbang of a palette

10:12:22 katy | beetle

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thoughts?

10:12:20 ET

Mythology
Awh, thank you! :DD

The Reaper

10:12:13 Reaper / Grim

Oh yay a storm has rolled in ;-;

10:11:47 ET

Drunk dude is now running around the station ð

10:11:43

ET

Your palette is pretty so it was worth being blinded by it

starmutt

10:11:15 marsh | they/it

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10:18:35

Since my oc is a God of Winter I'm gonna have to have a winter themed palette so my palette will also be a flash bang

Serpents

10:18:19 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

when you get the event wolf pelt it says right? and all levels ?

Existence

10:17:29 Exist / Kuskyn

Hehe Time for the flames <3 Test out how well my lasso fill tool works for me

10:17:00 katy | beetle

10:16:26

I hope I get my laptop back tomorrow

10:15:54 ET

Yes, making them on a laptop is much easier.

10:15:37 ET

Beetle
Distant definitely needs more art then, omg. You really should! :0

Mythology
Making palettes really is tedious </3 I didn't know anything about CSS until using WP

10:14:58

Are palettes easier to make on a laptop then on a phone? Color wise , cause my phone is making it difficult

10:14:42 katy | beetle

ET,
aa thank you! <3

i realized a few days ago that my poor boy distant only has like 3-4 fullbody pieces; so i'm gonna draw him a little something :)

10:14:14

Distant

That looks cool I love your art style

10:13:34 ET

LMAO SORRYYY
Sorry, I hope the spinning makes up for the blindness

10:13:25

ET

I'm currently struggling with making a palette

10:13:07 ET

Beetle
Omg, that looks awesome! :0
The legs look perfect *^* you draw em so well

10:12:48 katy | beetle

oh god i forgot about ET's flashbang of a palette

10:12:22 katy | beetle

-Click-

thoughts?

10:12:20 ET

Mythology
Awh, thank you! :DD

The Reaper

10:12:13 Reaper / Grim

Oh yay a storm has rolled in ;-;

10:11:47 ET

Drunk dude is now running around the station ð

10:11:43

ET

Your palette is pretty so it was worth being blinded by it

starmutt

10:11:15 marsh | they/it

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM