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 Zeraphia
11:45:23 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Only slightly? Screw up? If it'll LOAD--good gravy
 The Reaper
11:44:58 Reaper / Grim
Cap
I'm still slightly confused; did you screw up art??
 Zeraphia
11:44:33 Space Pirate Captain
I made things harder for myself.

Oh shoot.
 Lackadaisy
11:43:15 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

You okay?
 SpiritGuardian
11:42:45 Mr Palette Guy
Vah, because of what??
 Forest whisp
11:42:45 She /her/ daughter/
Y'all I hate winter it sucks
 The Reaper
11:42:38 Reaper / Grim
What did you do Cap-?
 Zeraphia
11:42:14 Space Pirate Captain
...
y'all ever go "oh shoot"
Because... uh...
 SpiritGuardian
11:41:41 Mr Palette Guy
I was up till one coding.
Surprisingly I code better at night
 Forest whisp
11:41:26 She /her/ daughter/
Yea
 The Reaper
11:40:15 Reaper / Grim
Forest
I know, I saw you XD :3

Daze
I know XD
 Forest whisp
11:40:09 She /her/ daughter/
XD
 Lackadaisy
11:39:01 Stray, LT | H/H
Brothers I was up until 8 last night
 Forest whisp
11:38:34 She /her/ daughter/
Me I was up till 12:00 last night

Reaper I was up till 4:00 last night

*-* *-*
 The Reaper
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 Lackadaisy
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🗞🗞🗞🗞
 The Reaper
11:33:23 Reaper / Grim
I'll sleep when you sleep
 Lackadaisy
11:33:07 Stray, LT | H/H
Sleep.
 The Reaper
11:32:48 Reaper / Grim
Daze.
 Lackadaisy
11:32:19 Stray, LT | H/H
Kryuk.

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 Zeraphia
11:45:23 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Only slightly? Screw up? If it'll LOAD--good gravy
 The Reaper
11:44:58 Reaper / Grim
Cap
I'm still slightly confused; did you screw up art??
 Zeraphia
11:44:33 Space Pirate Captain
I made things harder for myself.

Oh shoot.
 Lackadaisy
11:43:15 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

You okay?
 SpiritGuardian
11:42:45 Mr Palette Guy
Vah, because of what??
 Forest whisp
11:42:45 She /her/ daughter/
Y'all I hate winter it sucks
 The Reaper
11:42:38 Reaper / Grim
What did you do Cap-?
 Zeraphia
11:42:14 Space Pirate Captain
...
y'all ever go "oh shoot"
Because... uh...
 SpiritGuardian
11:41:41 Mr Palette Guy
I was up till one coding.
Surprisingly I code better at night
 Forest whisp
11:41:26 She /her/ daughter/
Yea
 The Reaper
11:40:15 Reaper / Grim
Forest
I know, I saw you XD :3

Daze
I know XD
 Forest whisp
11:40:09 She /her/ daughter/
XD
 Lackadaisy
11:39:01 Stray, LT | H/H
Brothers I was up until 8 last night
 Forest whisp
11:38:34 She /her/ daughter/
Me I was up till 12:00 last night

Reaper I was up till 4:00 last night

*-* *-*
 The Reaper
11:34:25 Reaper / Grim
🗞️🗞️🗞️
 Lackadaisy
11:33:37 Stray, LT | H/H
🗞🗞🗞🗞
 The Reaper
11:33:23 Reaper / Grim
I'll sleep when you sleep
 Lackadaisy
11:33:07 Stray, LT | H/H
Sleep.
 The Reaper
11:32:48 Reaper / Grim
Daze.
 Lackadaisy
11:32:19 Stray, LT | H/H
Kryuk.




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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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