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 distant-lands
01:12:10 katy | beetle
Bjake,
awh, damn that sucks! i got my flu shot last week and have been sick as hell ever since.

hope you feel better soon!
 Graywing
01:12:05 Slate, Gray
BJake

no, since i dont have a fever i cant skip
 BJake
01:11:29 Don't call me BJ.
@Mirko
For real T^T
 Mirko
01:10:48 Mir
Tis the season to be suffering from the flu
T-T
 SpiritGuardian
01:10:45 Mr Palette Guy
distant,
yeahh you be jealous
 BJake
01:10:23 Don't call me BJ.
@Distant-lands
I'm pretty sure the flu said "One times not enough" this new year
 Chat
01:10:17 
It's definitely been going around
Hoping I don't get it but probably will
 distant-lands
01:10:06 katy | beetle
spirit,
ugh </3 i'm jealous.
 SpiritGuardian
01:09:43 Mr Palette Guy
distant,
I'm not sick haha
 BJake
01:09:31 Don't call me BJ.
@Graywing
You get to stay home though, yeah?
 distant-lands
01:09:20 katy | beetle
everyone's sick right now, huh?
 Graywing
01:08:59 Slate, Gray
BJake

I'm also sick XD Its going around our school really bad
 BJake
01:07:24 Don't call me BJ.
@Graywing
Hey! I'm alright, got the flu again, but it's alright.
How about you??
 Graywing
01:06:46 Slate, Gray
Hey BJake

how are you?
 Chat
01:05:32 
Bjake
Hey how are you?
 BJake
01:05:07 Don't call me BJ.
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01:04:41 
Echo
Yeah it's a bug that I guess has arisen it's been reported
 Echo Eclipse
01:04:02 Echo | (They/She/He)
Never mind it just teleported me to tundra
 Echo Eclipse
01:00:55 Echo | (They/She/He)
Wait in explore I just levelled up after 200moves...
 SpiritGuardian
12:59:30 Mr Palette Guy
collar,
I'm gonna say.... like 4 months I'll have one

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 distant-lands
01:12:10 katy | beetle
Bjake,
awh, damn that sucks! i got my flu shot last week and have been sick as hell ever since.

hope you feel better soon!
 Graywing
01:12:05 Slate, Gray
BJake

no, since i dont have a fever i cant skip
 BJake
01:11:29 Don't call me BJ.
@Mirko
For real T^T
 Mirko
01:10:48 Mir
Tis the season to be suffering from the flu
T-T
 SpiritGuardian
01:10:45 Mr Palette Guy
distant,
yeahh you be jealous
 BJake
01:10:23 Don't call me BJ.
@Distant-lands
I'm pretty sure the flu said "One times not enough" this new year
 Chat
01:10:17 
It's definitely been going around
Hoping I don't get it but probably will
 distant-lands
01:10:06 katy | beetle
spirit,
ugh </3 i'm jealous.
 SpiritGuardian
01:09:43 Mr Palette Guy
distant,
I'm not sick haha
 BJake
01:09:31 Don't call me BJ.
@Graywing
You get to stay home though, yeah?
 distant-lands
01:09:20 katy | beetle
everyone's sick right now, huh?
 Graywing
01:08:59 Slate, Gray
BJake

I'm also sick XD Its going around our school really bad
 BJake
01:07:24 Don't call me BJ.
@Graywing
Hey! I'm alright, got the flu again, but it's alright.
How about you??
 Graywing
01:06:46 Slate, Gray
Hey BJake

how are you?
 Chat
01:05:32 
Bjake
Hey how are you?
 BJake
01:05:07 Don't call me BJ.
Heyo chat
 Chat
01:04:41 
Echo
Yeah it's a bug that I guess has arisen it's been reported
 Echo Eclipse
01:04:02 Echo | (They/She/He)
Never mind it just teleported me to tundra
 Echo Eclipse
01:00:55 Echo | (They/She/He)
Wait in explore I just levelled up after 200moves...
 SpiritGuardian
12:59:30 Mr Palette Guy
collar,
I'm gonna say.... like 4 months I'll have one




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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


Shadows At Twilight

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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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