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 The Veil
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Frozen
That's such a pretty color, I love dark fallow.
 Frozen Mist
04:48:22 Mad Scientist
I think I still have 95 left to pop today. e-e
 Frozen Mist
04:46:43 Mad Scientist
Thank you. ^.^
 distant-lands
04:43:31 katy | beetle
frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0
 Frozen Mist
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Was not expecting this from my pup boom.
 distant-lands
04:41:17 katy | beetle
cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through
 Catori
04:36:34 Cat
Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(
 Amygdala
04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Gotta drive home, be back soon
 distant-lands
04:34:03 katy | beetle
so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e
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A random legendary pelt
 Amygdala
04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks
 Catori
04:27:54 Cat
Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks
 Amygdala
04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim
 distant-lands
04:25:57 katy | beetle
my girls are not doing well this spring e.o
 distant-lands
04:23:13 katy | beetle
oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds
 Catori
04:21:32 Cat
Amy

Oh he is pretty!
 The Veil
04:14:00 
Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3
 Amygdala
04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala
Almost exact copy of his father
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 Catori
04:02:31 Cat
Aww I appreciate it <3
 Amygdala
03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD

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 The Veil
04:49:50 
Frozen
That's such a pretty color, I love dark fallow.
 Frozen Mist
04:48:22 Mad Scientist
I think I still have 95 left to pop today. e-e
 Frozen Mist
04:46:43 Mad Scientist
Thank you. ^.^
 distant-lands
04:43:31 katy | beetle
frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0
 Frozen Mist
04:42:36 Mad Scientist
-WP Click-

Was not expecting this from my pup boom.
 distant-lands
04:41:17 katy | beetle
cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through
 Catori
04:36:34 Cat
Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(
 Amygdala
04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Gotta drive home, be back soon
 distant-lands
04:34:03 katy | beetle
so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e
 Amygdala
04:31:43 Amy/Anpmygdala
-WP Click-
A random legendary pelt
 Amygdala
04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks
 Catori
04:27:54 Cat
Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks
 Amygdala
04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim
 distant-lands
04:25:57 katy | beetle
my girls are not doing well this spring e.o
 distant-lands
04:23:13 katy | beetle
oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds
 Catori
04:21:32 Cat
Amy

Oh he is pretty!
 The Veil
04:14:00 
Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3
 Amygdala
04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala
Almost exact copy of his father
-WP Click-
 Catori
04:02:31 Cat
Aww I appreciate it <3
 Amygdala
03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

https://s15.postimg.cc/4jkmy4zrf/draft.png
Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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