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04:43:31 katy | beetle

frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0

Frozen Mist

04:42:36 Mad Scientist

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Was not expecting this from my pup boom.

04:41:17 katy | beetle

cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through

04:36:34 Cat

Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(

04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gotta drive home, be back soon

04:34:03 katy | beetle

so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e

04:31:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

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A random legendary pelt

04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks

04:27:54 Cat

Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks

04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim

04:25:57 katy | beetle

my girls are not doing well this spring e.o

04:23:13 katy | beetle

oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds

04:21:32 Cat

Amy

Oh he is pretty!

The Veil

04:14:00

Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3

04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Almost exact copy of his father
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04:02:31 Cat

Aww I appreciate it <3

03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD

03:55:00 Cat

Aww <3 I would be honoured if you chose one from me :3

03:53:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Awww that would be amazing <3
I had mine for half a year so i was thinking of a change XD

03:52:19 Cat

I will play around with it tomorrow and let you know how it goes :D
Even if I don't do Avi's, I can do one for you <3

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04:43:31 katy | beetle

frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0

Frozen Mist

04:42:36 Mad Scientist

-WP Click-

Was not expecting this from my pup boom.

04:41:17 katy | beetle

cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through

04:36:34 Cat

Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(

04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gotta drive home, be back soon

04:34:03 katy | beetle

so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e

04:31:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

-WP Click-
A random legendary pelt

04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks

04:27:54 Cat

Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks

04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim

04:25:57 katy | beetle

my girls are not doing well this spring e.o

04:23:13 katy | beetle

oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds

04:21:32 Cat

Amy

Oh he is pretty!

The Veil

04:14:00

Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3

04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Almost exact copy of his father
-WP Click-

04:02:31 Cat

Aww I appreciate it <3

03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD

03:55:00 Cat

Aww <3 I would be honoured if you chose one from me :3

03:53:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Awww that would be amazing <3
I had mine for half a year so i was thinking of a change XD

03:52:19 Cat

I will play around with it tomorrow and let you know how it goes :D
Even if I don't do Avi's, I can do one for you <3

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM