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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/ i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion |
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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do. There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff. I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going! Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project! |
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Beetle Tea said:
Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do. There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff. I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going! Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!
i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it. Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those. thank you for your advice! ^^ |
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