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Yep. Hands. They're a butt.
https://i.postimg.cc/FFGhLWtB/image.png
This is a lineart for a commission I'm currently working on. I know there's some other minor issues that I need to work out, but.. that arm with the hand in the pocket. I've redrawn that so many times, and I just can't get that hand looking right. It's killing me. >.>
So, uh, if y'all have any advice for how to fix this, that'd be great. Maybe even a redline or something? I dunno. I'm just struggling. :'D
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I'd make the pockets on the pants just a bit higher, so more of the hand fits. Otherwise it looks brilliant ^^
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It looks awesome! The thumb tho..... XD it looks a little stubby And maybe the hand is abnormally flat? Edited at November 8, 2018 08:21 PM by Shadow Alphas
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I'm gonna try moving the pocket up ^^;
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Move it to the side a tad too. Maybe some more fur detail too?
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Neutral
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To be honest with u that looks amazing
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You should move the arm to make it look like it more to the side of the body instead of in front of it
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The headphones need to be in his ears a tad more ^^
It looks great o.O
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