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 Cybertronion
01:04:57 Cyber / Onion
Heck yeah :D
 SixBears
01:04:37 evebot
I'm going to add it to the Event shop.
 Cybertronion
01:03:46 Cyber / Onion
Omigosh the squirrel decor is so cute!
 Collar
01:00:19 Altar 🦌
Meow meow meow
 Ecifircas
12:59:58 
Here, kitty kitty kitty kitty
 Moonfall
12:59:56 Many moons, one me
Ok, that makes me grateful that ours just try to steal birdseed.
Your dislike (putting it very mildly)of squirrels is so valid, I'm pretty sure I'd lose my mind way sooner if that happened to me (and let's be honest, it's barely half there in the first place lol)
 The Silmaril Pack
12:59:23 
Omg
My first avatar. I might cry I feel so honored.
 SixBears
12:47:59 evebot
They also got in my roof and chewed wires. I had to have an electrician come out an fix it. And a roofer to block them from getting in. It made me mad.
 Moonfall
12:45:22 Many moons, one me
Eve
Love it! I've got a few of them that keeps trying to get to the birdseed. I think I'll just obliterate them from orbit lol
 SixBears
12:45:05 evebot
Except for the Explore part lol
 Moonfall
12:42:29 Many moons, one me
Serpents
As long as you at least try to rest, that's what matters. Yes sleep is better than just resting and actively trying to sleep, but actively trying to sleep is better than nothing at all
 SixBears
12:42:09 evebot
This event was inspired by the squirrels who raid my garden every summer. We do battle.
 Moonfall
12:40:46 Many moons, one me
And apples are tomatoes apparently 😂
 Serpents
12:39:54 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I know a bit of latin and maybe If I can find it on a sound mechince app as I use that, have like monk ones as meditation
I may head off and just try and sleep,
 Moonfall
12:38:20 Many moons, one me
Serpents
Then may I recommend Gregorian Chant? It's in Latin, so dead language, and it's just kinda droning on the background. I'm not necessarily religious but my parents are and put it on when I was little. Still knocks me out quickly even today
 Stormy Skies
12:36:03 
Sky admires the muscles of Squirrel 3, especially their thighs.

uh buddy....
 Serpents
12:34:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
the lulliby thing sounds helpful/good
 Serpents
12:34:37 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I tend to like sounds ex nature or soft chants
 Moonfall
12:33:17 Many moons, one me
Serpents
That's fair. I have to have lullabies in a language I sorta know but don't know completely, then I'm kinda focused on trying to translate but not so focused I'm staying awake.
Eve
I love how you phrased that lol
 Serpents
12:29:46 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
saved this one as it sums up my mind XD

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 Cybertronion
01:04:57 Cyber / Onion
Heck yeah :D
 SixBears
01:04:37 evebot
I'm going to add it to the Event shop.
 Cybertronion
01:03:46 Cyber / Onion
Omigosh the squirrel decor is so cute!
 Collar
01:00:19 Altar 🦌
Meow meow meow
 Ecifircas
12:59:58 
Here, kitty kitty kitty kitty
 Moonfall
12:59:56 Many moons, one me
Ok, that makes me grateful that ours just try to steal birdseed.
Your dislike (putting it very mildly)of squirrels is so valid, I'm pretty sure I'd lose my mind way sooner if that happened to me (and let's be honest, it's barely half there in the first place lol)
 The Silmaril Pack
12:59:23 
Omg
My first avatar. I might cry I feel so honored.
 SixBears
12:47:59 evebot
They also got in my roof and chewed wires. I had to have an electrician come out an fix it. And a roofer to block them from getting in. It made me mad.
 Moonfall
12:45:22 Many moons, one me
Eve
Love it! I've got a few of them that keeps trying to get to the birdseed. I think I'll just obliterate them from orbit lol
 SixBears
12:45:05 evebot
Except for the Explore part lol
 Moonfall
12:42:29 Many moons, one me
Serpents
As long as you at least try to rest, that's what matters. Yes sleep is better than just resting and actively trying to sleep, but actively trying to sleep is better than nothing at all
 SixBears
12:42:09 evebot
This event was inspired by the squirrels who raid my garden every summer. We do battle.
 Moonfall
12:40:46 Many moons, one me
And apples are tomatoes apparently 😂
 Serpents
12:39:54 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I know a bit of latin and maybe If I can find it on a sound mechince app as I use that, have like monk ones as meditation
I may head off and just try and sleep,
 Moonfall
12:38:20 Many moons, one me
Serpents
Then may I recommend Gregorian Chant? It's in Latin, so dead language, and it's just kinda droning on the background. I'm not necessarily religious but my parents are and put it on when I was little. Still knocks me out quickly even today
 Stormy Skies
12:36:03 
Sky admires the muscles of Squirrel 3, especially their thighs.

uh buddy....
 Serpents
12:34:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
the lulliby thing sounds helpful/good
 Serpents
12:34:37 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I tend to like sounds ex nature or soft chants
 Moonfall
12:33:17 Many moons, one me
Serpents
That's fair. I have to have lullabies in a language I sorta know but don't know completely, then I'm kinda focused on trying to translate but not so focused I'm staying awake.
Eve
I love how you phrased that lol
 Serpents
12:29:46 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
saved this one as it sums up my mind XD




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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s nest said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


DragonÂ’s nest said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s nest said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s nest said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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