Wolf Play : Critique?

09:15:37 Bright (She/Her)

well, almost finishing but still

09:15:20 Bright (She/Her)

The fuck? I've never seen a darkseeker scout before, and I'm still on forest level 5, what?

09:12:05 Vash | Xy

WT
I used my sourdough discard but I wanted to try ap flour and it turned out still surprisingly good cant stop squishing them cause they make that crunchy noise and it's so fun!
Now to make more bread and become the breadmaster queen :00

That's good to hear!! WT can draw 3D what now :0
Dats so cool!!! :D fishhh

09:11:03 ET

Kháos
Thank you! :D my first two coursework deadlines are coming up within two weeks, so the pressure is on </3

Awh man, with no in between?</3 that sucks, I hope a better balance comes your way soon!

09:09:52 Vash | Xy

Echo
Exactly Exactly

09:09:35 Acorn (She/Her)

Vash
Amazing xD

09:08:50 Vash | Xy

Acorn
I was literally just singing that outloud now haha xD

Kháos

09:08:46 Kaos || Kháos

ET-
Good luck with your finals!

I'm okay too, just been either bored with nothing to do or busy with various things that need done. </3

09:08:36 Acorn (She/Her)

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Aw no quests for April?

09:08:15 Echo (They/He)

Xy
Same, and the fun thing is, that it's wp lore!

09:07:57 ET

Xyto
What type of bread did you make? :0 Anything specific?
You have defeated the bread recipe B) the possibilities are endless now

And thank you! :D I've had bits and pieces here and there, I can make cool 3D stuff now though :D
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Echo
LMAO, that's amazing omg. Perfectly timed squirrel meme for the jitter

09:07:37 Acorn (She/Her)

Vash
You other squirrels can't deny :")

09:07:26

I had a semi pet squirrel named skittles when I was 14

Moonfall

09:07:17 Many moons, one me

Vash
Same, but my brain is changing the lyrics to other squirrel related things

09:07:00 Acorn (She/Her)

-WP Click-
I love this avatar's colors xD

Struggle Bus

09:06:44 tug / devi

I love squirrels, this is great

09:05:40 Vash | Xy

I can't get over the I like big nuts and I cannot lie
It's stuck in my head now

09:04:51 Echo (They/He)

ET
The most random thing just tickled me, I went onto your den and hovered over your profile, it shook and the text was "Behold!! My power!" etc.

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i think they spawn on all levels?

09:15:37 Bright (She/Her)

well, almost finishing but still

09:15:20 Bright (She/Her)

The fuck? I've never seen a darkseeker scout before, and I'm still on forest level 5, what?

09:12:05 Vash | Xy

09:11:03 ET

09:09:52 Vash | Xy

Echo
Exactly Exactly

09:09:35 Acorn (She/Her)

Vash
Amazing xD

09:08:50 Vash | Xy

Acorn
I was literally just singing that outloud now haha xD

Kháos

09:08:46 Kaos || Kháos

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Good luck with your finals!

I'm okay too, just been either bored with nothing to do or busy with various things that need done. </3

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Aw no quests for April?

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Xy
Same, and the fun thing is, that it's wp lore!

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09:07:37 Acorn (She/Her)

Vash
You other squirrels can't deny :")

09:07:26

I had a semi pet squirrel named skittles when I was 14

Moonfall

09:07:17 Many moons, one me

Vash
Same, but my brain is changing the lyrics to other squirrel related things

09:07:00 Acorn (She/Her)

-WP Click-
I love this avatar's colors xD

Struggle Bus

09:06:44 tug / devi

I love squirrels, this is great

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I can't get over the I like big nuts and I cannot lie
It's stuck in my head now

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ET
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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are grstuff cheeksly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also grstuff cheeksly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a grstuff cheekser realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a grstuff cheekser realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For squirrels with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For squirrels with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real squirrels and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM