Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Summer Month: 1 
Night 
Clear Moon: 
| Chatbox |
| Moonfall |
| Eye Well 2 has to make sure the rocket works and if everything goes well that'll be when we land there. This mission just goes all around then straight home and takes 10 days. Kinda like Apollo 9 or 10 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| nrc really?? apparently the first moon landing was a 4 day trip? |
| Eye of Eternity |
| eve 2028?? surely it doesn't take that long to get to the moon?? |
| Moonfall |
| I love seeing history in action. Last time we had a launch like this my mother wasn't even born yet |
| Moonfall |
| That launch was epic, I learned I could prance in excitement lol |
| SixBears |
| The launch was amazeballs. Those astronauts are very brave strapping themselves to that rocket. |
| Continental Wolves |
| I have no clue what I should make for dinner ;-; Made fried ravioli for lunch but have no idea what should be for dinner |
| Acerbus. |
| Collar It was absolutely amazing, I've never been so emotional over a livefeed xD Tern They sent 4 astronauts into space to circle the moon! FIrst time in my life we've sent people out that far |
| The Silmaril Pack |
| Owl lol they're incredibly bad. I wish you the best with the art. I want to start but really don't know if I'll have enough focus. I move too much. |
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| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Brown Bear : -1 |
| Cheetah : +5 |
| Rattlesnake : -4 |
| Chatbox |
| Moonfall |
| Eye Well 2 has to make sure the rocket works and if everything goes well that'll be when we land there. This mission just goes all around then straight home and takes 10 days. Kinda like Apollo 9 or 10 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| nrc really?? apparently the first moon landing was a 4 day trip? |
| Eye of Eternity |
| eve 2028?? surely it doesn't take that long to get to the moon?? |
| Moonfall |
| I love seeing history in action. Last time we had a launch like this my mother wasn't even born yet |
| Moonfall |
| That launch was epic, I learned I could prance in excitement lol |
| SixBears |
| The launch was amazeballs. Those astronauts are very brave strapping themselves to that rocket. |
| Continental Wolves |
| I have no clue what I should make for dinner ;-; Made fried ravioli for lunch but have no idea what should be for dinner |
| Acerbus. |
| Collar It was absolutely amazing, I've never been so emotional over a livefeed xD Tern They sent 4 astronauts into space to circle the moon! FIrst time in my life we've sent people out that far |
| The Silmaril Pack |
| Owl lol they're incredibly bad. I wish you the best with the art. I want to start but really don't know if I'll have enough focus. I move too much. |
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