Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
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Fall Month: 1 
Night 
Hurricane Moon: 
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| Feiella |
| I woke up to the sound of a thud. Got to see my cat attack the window, fall, jump back up, bang her head, fall, jump up and hiss at a random cat outside my window on Easter. She came over to tell me all about it, purring and making biscuits once the cat was gone. Love my strange protective cat |
| Ninjago Realm |
| Zane Julien gazes at the clouds. Stats: Perception +3 Mood: Peaceful why are you at peace do you not see the storm??? just gazing at the hurrican's clouds.... |
| Night Raven College |
| Hi guys, I’m still on my trip but I got wifi so I logged on to say hello(: |
| Serpents |
| just got the hotle thing.... now I know whom Ill send not only ninjago with no contex but also after I translated it a bit.... |
| Serpents |
| @Tern maybe? more so for her want like Pales name (sorry im picky ) |
| Nekros |
| -WP Click- Looking for RP partners and: -WP Click- Looking for gear & decor ideas :) |
| Andypaws |
| -WP Click- -WP Click- I got twins finally. They're not the best but im gonna throw some dyes on em and keep em for the sake of having twin wolves |
| Tartarus |
| Do I open my commission auction a second time today or no? Also really sorry if I can't ask that in main |
| Wild Runners |
| Oh my gosh, litterally someone was targeting me for like 15 minutes and I had NO food and when I finally died he said 'EZ' Like.. what? |
| Andypaws |
| Scooby headbutted my elbow and now he is sitting in the corner of my room, pouting and whining </3 |
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| Alliance Battles |
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 | Cheetah : +2 |
| Sun Bear : -5 |
| Leopard : -1 |
| Chatbox |
| Feiella |
| I woke up to the sound of a thud. Got to see my cat attack the window, fall, jump back up, bang her head, fall, jump up and hiss at a random cat outside my window on Easter. She came over to tell me all about it, purring and making biscuits once the cat was gone. Love my strange protective cat |
| Ninjago Realm |
| Zane Julien gazes at the clouds. Stats: Perception +3 Mood: Peaceful why are you at peace do you not see the storm??? just gazing at the hurrican's clouds.... |
| Night Raven College |
| Hi guys, I’m still on my trip but I got wifi so I logged on to say hello(: |
| Serpents |
| just got the hotle thing.... now I know whom Ill send not only ninjago with no contex but also after I translated it a bit.... |
| Serpents |
| @Tern maybe? more so for her want like Pales name (sorry im picky ) |
| Nekros |
| -WP Click- Looking for RP partners and: -WP Click- Looking for gear & decor ideas :) |
| Andypaws |
| -WP Click- -WP Click- I got twins finally. They're not the best but im gonna throw some dyes on em and keep em for the sake of having twin wolves |
| Tartarus |
| Do I open my commission auction a second time today or no? Also really sorry if I can't ask that in main |
| Wild Runners |
| Oh my gosh, litterally someone was targeting me for like 15 minutes and I had NO food and when I finally died he said 'EZ' Like.. what? |
| Andypaws |
| Scooby headbutted my elbow and now he is sitting in the corner of my room, pouting and whining </3 |
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