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How are you

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Xy
Good. I missed you too. Had been super busy. I hatched 11 chickens and bought 9 so now have 20 and just hatched 3 quail so I have 10 quail now and im about to move to 30 acres of land

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Of course! Anytime!

02:36:38 renee

@Moonfall
thank you!! <3

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how are you? ive missed you<3

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My xyxy. XD

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my cycy<333

02:31:52 Axan hoarder

I just bred all my wolves again finally.
Also im so happy all 3 of my quail made it through the night. Now just gotta wait til they are nice and fluffy and waiting for one to have their toes uncurl

02:26:26 renee

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waiting on her pups </3

02:24:20 Axan hoarder

I need more axanthics. Mine are all old.

02:23:52 Many moons, one me

Btw, aren't Virginia au Augustus and Mustang the same person? (It's been a minute so I'm trying to remember)

Imladris

02:23:40

Wow, my starter alphas just threw a random Gaelic Blood boost pup... o.O
Do you call that lucky or what x')
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Scorpion
I love it! I need to read the last 2 books and they're finally almost ready to borrow. I mean, book 6 has been ready for ages but I want to read book 5 before 6

02:17:13 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm hopping off to watch tv bye, see you guys later

02:16:54 Axan hoarder

I spy a xyxy

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Eve
Pretty

Lucky Rat

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Megan
Yeah^x^

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02:40:11 Axan hoarder

How are you

02:40:02 Axan hoarder

Xy
Good. I missed you too. Had been super busy. I hatched 11 chickens and bought 9 so now have 20 and just hatched 3 quail so I have 10 quail now and im about to move to 30 acres of land

02:37:54 Many moons, one me

Of course! Anytime!

02:36:38 renee

@Moonfall
thank you!! <3

02:36:17 Vash | Xy

how are you? ive missed you<3

02:35:24 Axan hoarder

02:35:08 Axan hoarder

My xyxy. XD

02:34:47 Vash | Xy

my cycy<333

02:31:52 Axan hoarder

I just bred all my wolves again finally.
Also im so happy all 3 of my quail made it through the night. Now just gotta wait til they are nice and fluffy and waiting for one to have their toes uncurl

02:26:26 renee

-WP Click-
waiting on her pups </3

02:24:20 Axan hoarder

I need more axanthics. Mine are all old.

02:23:52 Many moons, one me

Btw, aren't Virginia au Augustus and Mustang the same person? (It's been a minute so I'm trying to remember)

Imladris

02:23:40

Wow, my starter alphas just threw a random Gaelic Blood boost pup... o.O
Do you call that lucky or what x')
-WP Click-

02:22:13 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
I love it! I need to read the last 2 books and they're finally almost ready to borrow. I mean, book 6 has been ready for ages but I want to read book 5 before 6

02:17:13 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm hopping off to watch tv bye, see you guys later

02:16:54 Axan hoarder

I spy a xyxy

02:13:12 NRC/Night/Raven

Eve
Pretty

Lucky Rat

02:10:29 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Megan
Yeah^x^

Hallow's Eve

02:10:27 Hallow, Eve

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I can't wait for her pups 0^0

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM