Wolf Play : Critique?

03:28:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

what kinda hair style fits a bear shifter? long or shorter? (based off a form of black bear) if that matters/helps XD

Collar

03:25:35 Altar 🦌

Vapor is a pretty cool power #notbiased

03:24:17 Kneecap stealer

I got a mela

Acerbus.

03:18:57 Ace

Anybody up for a fantasy roleplay? Shoot me a PM ^^

03:15:10 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

if anyone has ides for shifter/hybrid forms pm me would love if they kinda fit with one of the following powers(unless Unpowered)
Powers are Ash,
Vapor
Asteral
sand
glass
soul
or magma
(or for soul does a spirit bear sound cool? )

Winterfell

03:12:25 Winter

Sleep
What feather ?

03:06:24 Kneecap stealer

5 apples for a fucking feather? I really need one

02:47:48 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- Please help me

02:47:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click-
what name sounds cooler for his last name(pm me it please )
Arcite
Taurus
Nocturne
Hyberion
Arce
Durai
Bloodtide
Nightshade
Whitesun

02:41:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Oh man im realizing i drew his ref sheet backwards...

02:37:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Snake

Yep! Ive been making a lot of art of him

Owl

Yeah only a couple people were in chat when i first posted it

02:35:06

Andy
I love his patterns :o is this the shock animation character?

02:33:02 tiger\Owl|she\her

Andy that’s looks amazing!! (I must’ve been offline before)

02:31:39 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- i posted this earlier but i love my science experiment boy

02:30:24 tiger\Owl|she\her

callie rests their gaze intently on Cosmos (Owlstar).
Stats: Social +1
Mood: Flirty Errrrrm lesbian???

Volks

02:18:46 Volks

Looks good! I think it is a perfect size

02:17:37

02:16:51

Jester
looks cool :o

02:16:29

I made my avatar a lil bigger hows it look chat?

St. Cloverbeast

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03:28:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

what kinda hair style fits a bear shifter? long or shorter? (based off a form of black bear) if that matters/helps XD

Collar

03:25:35 Altar 🦌

Vapor is a pretty cool power #notbiased

03:24:17 Kneecap stealer

I got a mela

Acerbus.

03:18:57 Ace

Anybody up for a fantasy roleplay? Shoot me a PM ^^

03:15:10 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Winterfell

03:12:25 Winter

Sleep
What feather ?

03:06:24 Kneecap stealer

5 apples for a fucking feather? I really need one

02:47:48 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- Please help me

02:47:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click-
what name sounds cooler for his last name(pm me it please )
Arcite
Taurus
Nocturne
Hyberion
Arce
Durai
Bloodtide
Nightshade
Whitesun

02:41:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Oh man im realizing i drew his ref sheet backwards...

02:37:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Snake

Yep! Ive been making a lot of art of him

Owl

Yeah only a couple people were in chat when i first posted it

02:35:06

Andy
I love his patterns :o is this the shock animation character?

02:33:02 tiger\Owl|she\her

Andy that’s looks amazing!! (I must’ve been offline before)

02:31:39 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- i posted this earlier but i love my science experiment boy

02:30:24 tiger\Owl|she\her

callie rests their gaze intently on Cosmos (Owlstar).
Stats: Social +1
Mood: Flirty Errrrrm lesbian???

Volks

02:18:46 Volks

Looks good! I think it is a perfect size

02:17:37

02:16:51

Jester
looks cool :o

02:16:29

I made my avatar a lil bigger hows it look chat?

St. Cloverbeast

02:13:53 Will

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM