Wolf Play : Critique?

11:38:41 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I think im gonna get to 200 eggs and then log off for a bit. Im exhausted lol

Owlstar

11:36:21 tiger\Owl|she\her

Willllowwwwwwwwwww I have a wolffffyyyyyyy

11:30:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
I do lol, I’m use to her saying weird shit like I’m fine with that but if she gets up or out of her bed I AM chuckling my slippers at her saying “back demon! Back I say”

11:29:30 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Is tundra good?

11:28:19 Many moons, one me

Lucky, if she's asleep just disregard it and then torment her with it when she wakes up/silly

11:28:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Lol

11:27:22 cloud (he/they)

rat

i love how im j=genting smack from different ways by cats who are sleeping

11:25:16 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Nah you don’t need to/joking

11:24:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

My sister scared me XD so we share a room because we don’t have a lot of rooms in the house and she talks in her sleep so she sat up and looked at me then said “just be careful their watching” what the fuck dose she mean!? Who!

Sowelu

11:23:07

To the bone pile with these pups x.x meh

11:22:53 cloud (he/they)

rat

mine wont get off and i need to go for a jog

11:21:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Aww cute, mine is downstairs right now (she’s a chihuahua mixed with an American Eskimo)

11:20:13

11:19:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Maybe check with me later, two of my females are pregnant but haven’t given birth yet but if they pop out any ones I don’t want I’ll just give them to ya

11:19:21 Many moons, one me

Today, I have a mere 6 hour auction... That is because I set it up while in a time crunch yesterday and apparently messed up, having it start at 3 today instead of 3 yesterday. And I'm now hoping people actually bid on them cause I need the space

11:18:04

Less that two years old

11:17:55 cloud (he/they)

tern

oki i think it was your turn

rat aww i have a fur baby in my lap on on my shoulder and somehow my last on got on my head (all cats

11:17:46

Do you have any unwanted pups

11:17:10 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Yes?

11:16:29

Rat

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11:38:41 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I think im gonna get to 200 eggs and then log off for a bit. Im exhausted lol

Owlstar

11:36:21 tiger\Owl|she\her

Willllowwwwwwwwwww I have a wolffffyyyyyyy

11:30:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
I do lol, I’m use to her saying weird shit like I’m fine with that but if she gets up or out of her bed I AM chuckling my slippers at her saying “back demon! Back I say”

11:29:30 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Is tundra good?

11:28:19 Many moons, one me

Lucky, if she's asleep just disregard it and then torment her with it when she wakes up/silly

11:28:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Lol

11:27:22 cloud (he/they)

rat

i love how im j=genting smack from different ways by cats who are sleeping

11:25:16 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Nah you don’t need to/joking

11:24:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Sowelu

11:23:07

To the bone pile with these pups x.x meh

11:22:53 cloud (he/they)

rat

mine wont get off and i need to go for a jog

11:21:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud
Aww cute, mine is downstairs right now (she’s a chihuahua mixed with an American Eskimo)

11:20:13

11:19:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Maybe check with me later, two of my females are pregnant but haven’t given birth yet but if they pop out any ones I don’t want I’ll just give them to ya

11:19:21 Many moons, one me

11:18:04

Less that two years old

11:17:55 cloud (he/they)

tern

oki i think it was your turn

rat aww i have a fur baby in my lap on on my shoulder and somehow my last on got on my head (all cats

11:17:46

Do you have any unwanted pups

11:17:10 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Yes?

11:16:29

Rat

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM