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hey cloud :3

eer
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You got this Lol
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 Eye of Eternity
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eer
will do :3 just gotta figure out how to do that,,,
thank youu :33
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Evergreen do you got and un wanted pups
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willow
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Eyeguy
Maybe add like part of his lower legs but its looking so good X3
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 Eye of Eternity
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do we think this looks good -Click- or should i add his legs because hes actually falling like this -Click-
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Pups not pips
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It sucks that I don't have any pips for my
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Oh hello :3
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Evergreen I'm daisyeye just on an alt
 Willow moonlight
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Oh I bet it does but I can't see chat while I'm doing other things
 Willow moonlight
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So no computer or tablet 😕
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Phone isn't that bad
VR fucken sucks
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I'm on my phone it fucken sucks to play on phone but I'm in a car

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 Eye of Eternity
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hey cloud :3

eer
probably yeah :'3
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You got this Lol
 EvergreenHills
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No ?
 Eye of Eternity
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eer
will do :3 just gotta figure out how to do that,,,
thank youu :33
 Willow moonlight
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Evergreen do you got and un wanted pups
 cloudpack
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tern


hiii
 Eye of Eternity
11:06:37 tern | they/he
willow
thank you :3
 EvergreenHills
11:06:18 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Maybe add like part of his lower legs but its looking so good X3
 Willow moonlight
11:04:24 
Art
 Willow moonlight
11:04:21 
Nice aret
 Eye of Eternity
11:03:42 tern | they/he
do we think this looks good -Click- or should i add his legs because hes actually falling like this -Click-
 Willow moonlight
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Pups not pips
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Yes
 Willow moonlight
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It sucks that I don't have any pips for my
Pup adoption center
 EvergreenHills
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Daisy
Oh hello :3
 Willow moonlight
11:00:04 
Evergreen I'm daisyeye just on an alt
 Willow moonlight
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Oh I bet it does but I can't see chat while I'm doing other things
 Willow moonlight
10:58:29 
So no computer or tablet 😕
 EvergreenHills
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Phone isn't that bad
VR fucken sucks
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I'm on my phone it fucken sucks to play on phone but I'm in a car




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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