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07:47:57 Pier/Shore

Yea XD

07:47:30 ezra, he/him

girl you do Not want to post passive aggressive emojis at a mod lol

Willow moonlight

07:46:21

🙄

Willow moonlight

07:45:48

ok

07:44:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Willow
Stop asking others if they want pups. Offering, selling pups are not allowed in main chat

Red River Wolves

07:43:56 Redd Dead

Jester,
Generally I make a different post for separate bugs

07:39:19

its not letting me explore without going to fatal error now do I make another bug report or can I edit the old one..?

07:38:06

the ghost elk are out to get me man i tell you

07:37:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

Right*

07:37:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

Jester Oop is definitely rigth

07:36:53

oop my explore went to fatal error after that ._.

07:33:57

figured it out i think

07:29:48

I found it Khaos am I able to put screenshots in this? been trying for a minute or so?

07:28:25 Pier/Shore

Jester
did you get my pm?

07:26:05 Kaos || Kháos

Bug reports are in the Bugs section of the Forums, which you can find under the Gathering tab. -WP Click-

07:23:44

theres like 2 elk there on the map but they dont exist when I walk over them

GreatestAxolotl

07:23:01

Fake Elk?

07:21:48

tries to figure out where bug reports are because fake elk are haunting me in explore?

StarlightDreamer

07:20:53 Caitlyn/Star

nicee

Willow moonlight

07:17:10

i just got 45 apples

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07:47:57 Pier/Shore

Yea XD

07:47:30 ezra, he/him

girl you do Not want to post passive aggressive emojis at a mod lol

Willow moonlight

07:46:21

🙄

Willow moonlight

07:45:48

ok

07:44:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Willow
Stop asking others if they want pups. Offering, selling pups are not allowed in main chat

Red River Wolves

07:43:56 Redd Dead

Jester,
Generally I make a different post for separate bugs

07:39:19

its not letting me explore without going to fatal error now do I make another bug report or can I edit the old one..?

07:38:06

the ghost elk are out to get me man i tell you

07:37:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

Right*

07:37:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

Jester Oop is definitely rigth

07:36:53

oop my explore went to fatal error after that ._.

07:33:57

figured it out i think

07:29:48

I found it Khaos am I able to put screenshots in this? been trying for a minute or so?

07:28:25 Pier/Shore

Jester
did you get my pm?

07:26:05 Kaos || Kháos

Bug reports are in the Bugs section of the Forums, which you can find under the Gathering tab. -WP Click-

07:23:44

theres like 2 elk there on the map but they dont exist when I walk over them

GreatestAxolotl

07:23:01

Fake Elk?

07:21:48

tries to figure out where bug reports are because fake elk are haunting me in explore?

StarlightDreamer

07:20:53 Caitlyn/Star

nicee

Willow moonlight

07:17:10

i just got 45 apples

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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