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what was Eves this year april fools day like?

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boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

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Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

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Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

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just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

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Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

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Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
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02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

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Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

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Heyy

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Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

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I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

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I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

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Yall im praying this pack will be nice and let me have my axanthic back. I boarded with another pack for a couple days and they put him up for 5 mush for me to pick up and did it when I was offline. Im o sad. 😭

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It was squirrels this year.

04:24:07 The Howling Shrek

what was Eves this year april fools day like?

04:23:42 The Howling Shrek

boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

starrii-featherz

04:19:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

-WP Click-

Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

Smilecat

03:24:52 Anthony // He/they

just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

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January 9, 2022 09:40 PM

Darkseeker

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 9, 2022 10:14 PM

los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

and the nose is a lil eh

January 10, 2022 09:41 AM

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los campesinos! said:

i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲

What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺

January 10, 2022 11:43 AM

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I think the nose just blend's in too much.

January 10, 2022 11:44 AM

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Revenge Full Of Lust said:

I think the nose just blend's in too much.

Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.

January 10, 2022 11:48 AM

Eternity

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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

January 10, 2022 12:27 PM

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Eternity said:

I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

Thank you!

I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-

January 10, 2022 11:09 PM