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Thanks! I just changed them. Im still figuring out the game. I'm doing really good. The community on here is so nice!

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06:46:30 toe licker

wild

50 APPLES?!?! DAMN!

06:46:03 toe licker

dawn
vitals, if they are all positive its a hero. the higher the vitals, the better.

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06:45:42 Stalking chat

-WP Click-
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06:45:37 Dawn

How can you tell if a wolf is a hero or not?

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06:45:33 Stalking chat

PRAYING I make him a -WP Click-

06:44:51 toe licker

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decent rarity, 99 talents, good CP, and a hero yeah. pretty good. ^^

06:43:29 Dawn

Is this wolf good or bad? -WP Click-

06:42:12 toe licker

dawn
ah, bummer. lol

06:41:34 Dawn

Not really lol. Just a few shamrocks and food

06:40:18 toe licker

dawn
^^ find anything good??

06:39:31 Dawn

Sorry I was exploring haha

06:38:59 toe licker

not! dammit! i keep scaring everyone away!! T-T

06:31:28 toe licker

Dert
mwehehehehe may I ask why?? >:D (sarcastic)

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06:30:38 Petri Dish/Dert

Ugh, tomorrow is my least favorite day of the year. ~_~

06:27:47 toe licker

will
now that I think of it, that sounds kinda yummy!

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06:27:32 Will

@Dawn

Dominance probably

06:27:29 toe licker

Dawn
did you feed and give them water?

06:27:11 Dawn

So, does anyone know why my pack happiness is only 50? I made sure that all the affinity is either good or excellent and they are all fed and watered.

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06:25:52 Will

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Yes T-T
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06:25:46 Dawn

Thanks! I just changed them. Im still figuring out the game. I'm doing really good. The community on here is so nice!

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM