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08:08:56 P'Sky/Sky-kun

21 Sad news
;--;

08:08:00 Cinn / Ace

nimbus's kids are so cute ToT

08:06:45 Cinn / Ace

dark
i might free range the pups i jsut got and take them back after sorting the otehrs

Master Darkfire

08:06:41 Dark/fire/ice

also I only have 1 mush...

Master Darkfire

08:06:26 Dark/fire/ice

oof. I would take em but I don't have room either hehe

08:06:04 Cinn / Ace

dark
i have another wolf in labor and i have 1 space in my den
hehe
i'm in danger

Master Darkfire

08:05:27 Dark/fire/ice

oh dang...

08:05:02 Cinn / Ace

-WP Click-
fuck
but orchid had kids

Master Darkfire

08:04:51 Dark/fire/ice

oop...that don't sound good...

Night Raven College

08:04:40 NRC/Night/Raven

See you later(:

08:04:34 Cinn / Ace

why
do i have 16 notifications

Master Darkfire

08:04:24 Dark/fire/ice

by NRC!!

Master Darkfire

08:04:17 Dark/fire/ice

I have to beat the wolves game a few more times so I can get 3 more tokens hehehe

Night Raven College

08:03:49 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm off for now bye

Night Raven College

08:03:39 NRC/Night/Raven

(:

Master Darkfire

08:03:17 Dark/fire/ice

lol

Night Raven College

08:03:09 NRC/Night/Raven

I do too I'm just waiting for my wolves to die off so I can do it

Master Darkfire

08:02:49 Dark/fire/ice

aaaaaah ok! :3 I love to gamble with that game hehehe

08:02:28 Exist / Kuskyn

Collar man, I am happy with the new guyy He fits the vibes perfectly xD
Haha That is such a you thing to say xD

Night Raven College

08:02:20 NRC/Night/Raven

And the mush is for Winter.

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08:08:56 P'Sky/Sky-kun

21 Sad news
;--;

08:08:00 Cinn / Ace

nimbus's kids are so cute ToT

08:06:45 Cinn / Ace

dark
i might free range the pups i jsut got and take them back after sorting the otehrs

Master Darkfire

08:06:41 Dark/fire/ice

also I only have 1 mush...

Master Darkfire

08:06:26 Dark/fire/ice

oof. I would take em but I don't have room either hehe

08:06:04 Cinn / Ace

dark
i have another wolf in labor and i have 1 space in my den
hehe
i'm in danger

Master Darkfire

08:05:27 Dark/fire/ice

oh dang...

08:05:02 Cinn / Ace

-WP Click-
fuck
but orchid had kids

Master Darkfire

08:04:51 Dark/fire/ice

oop...that don't sound good...

Night Raven College

08:04:40 NRC/Night/Raven

See you later(:

08:04:34 Cinn / Ace

why
do i have 16 notifications

Master Darkfire

08:04:24 Dark/fire/ice

by NRC!!

Master Darkfire

08:04:17 Dark/fire/ice

I have to beat the wolves game a few more times so I can get 3 more tokens hehehe

Night Raven College

08:03:49 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm off for now bye

Night Raven College

08:03:39 NRC/Night/Raven

(:

Master Darkfire

08:03:17 Dark/fire/ice

lol

Night Raven College

08:03:09 NRC/Night/Raven

I do too I'm just waiting for my wolves to die off so I can do it

Master Darkfire

08:02:49 Dark/fire/ice

aaaaaah ok! :3 I love to gamble with that game hehehe

08:02:28 Exist / Kuskyn

Collar man, I am happy with the new guyy He fits the vibes perfectly xD
Haha That is such a you thing to say xD

Night Raven College

08:02:20 NRC/Night/Raven

And the mush is for Winter.

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March 3, 2020 12:15 PM

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Any advice/suggestions for this - https://postimg.cc/sQftw23n

(I haven't lined it yet or put in color)

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:29 PM by Flower Field

March 3, 2020 12:19 PM

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It)s adorable! Maybe do some creams or reds when you color it in? Otherwise, beautiful!

March 3, 2020 12:51 PM

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Define the face a bit more. Other than that, it's great!

March 3, 2020 12:52 PM

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I am jealous....why

March 3, 2020 12:54 PM

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The right side of the mouth looks a tad bit distorted to me. And I think it would be rather cool if you gave a bit more attention to the 'extra' flowers or maybe choose one or two types of flowers to use in the entire piece.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty great! That's mostly just my personal opinion.

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:55 PM by Hollow_Howls

March 3, 2020 12:58 PM

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Thanks for the advice so far guys! I'm gonna work on it a bit more then post a new picture of it.

March 4, 2020 04:37 PM

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Here's one of the colored copies! (I made copies to color so I have more if I wanna change something) - https://postimg.cc/5j1YPtVv

Edited at March 4, 2020 04:38 PM by Flower Field

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