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I need to check on my other accounts lnao

01:49:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

He's certainly an odd fellow

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1073/1900 mush

01:47:50 Kneecap stealer

He's weird

01:46:33 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- he's fully asleep but his eyes are slightly open and rolled back😭

01:44:34 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I cant get a video of him snoring (because i don't know how to share videos on here) but ill snap a picture of him sleeping with his eyes open

01:43:44 Kneecap stealer

Picture or it didn't happen

01:43:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Dude my dog is snoring with his eyes OPEN, im crying

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Lmao

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I think this is my new record
You have 45 Wishbone(s) to give

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I offer various payment methods for wolves ^_^

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I just used my pop figurine on her, we can sort out the price in dms

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2k!! I’m to poor

01:11:50 Kneecap stealer

FUCK..I forgot he was 2k mush,after orchid petal pops we can work something out in dms for her

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I need to get more space for all these wolfies I want

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Yessss

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Ooooooooo!

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Goulish- I have an infa wolf on hold for me if you want her?

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HA… THERES A bald and extra kidneys defect 😭✌️

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02:12:05 Axan hoarder

Need more people
-WP Click-

01:52:01 Kneecap stealer

I need to check on my other accounts lnao

01:49:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

He's certainly an odd fellow

01:48:15 Kneecap stealer

1073/1900 mush

01:47:50 Kneecap stealer

He's weird

01:46:33 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- he's fully asleep but his eyes are slightly open and rolled back😭

01:44:34 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I cant get a video of him snoring (because i don't know how to share videos on here) but ill snap a picture of him sleeping with his eyes open

01:43:44 Kneecap stealer

Picture or it didn't happen

01:43:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Dude my dog is snoring with his eyes OPEN, im crying

01:38:25 Kneecap stealer

Lmao

01:35:36 Silv, Via

I think this is my new record
You have 45 Wishbone(s) to give

01:18:23 Kneecap stealer

I offer various payment methods for wolves ^_^

01:14:05 Kneecap stealer

I just used my pop figurine on her, we can sort out the price in dms

01:13:26

2k!! I’m to poor

01:11:50 Kneecap stealer

FUCK..I forgot he was 2k mush,after orchid petal pops we can work something out in dms for her

01:10:10

I need to get more space for all these wolfies I want

01:09:37

Yessss

01:09:27

Ooooooooo!

01:08:55 Kneecap stealer

Goulish- I have an infa wolf on hold for me if you want her?

01:08:50

HA… THERES A bald and extra kidneys defect 😭✌️

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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