Wolf Play : Critique?

01:34:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

I got a bucket of junk.

01:33:22 Many moons, one me

Anyone else have a deaf relative who refuses to put hearing aids in, starts a whole conversation, then gets frustrated cause they can't hear your response?

01:32:09 Winter

Owl
I thought you had no apples ?

Vax

01:21:47 a rock in your shoe

damn this game is weirdd

01:21:13 He/They pronouns

I hate drawing horses ToT

01:20:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I GOT A REALLY COOL EYE DYE!!!!!

01:18:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ima gamble with Bree the fox

Vax

01:15:52 a rock in your shoe

oh green guy is amazinger

o n e i r o

01:13:14 vaxs alt

im playing the freak circus for the first time the clown guy is amazing

01:11:21 Winter

Oops forgot to link -WP Click-

01:09:59 Winter

I feel like I should train her up battle because she no good for me other wise although she is a defect x boost

01:09:26 He/They pronouns

Release the babies! ToT

-WP Click-

01:03:42 Cyber / Onion

Star

Omg so sparkly xD

01:01:54

-WP Click- cool?

Xanthius

12:59:14 Xan

Vash
thats so real omg i cant wait to get home so i can eat some food

12:57:42 Cyber / Onion

-WP Click-
Another boost! The dry spell has ended

12:49:12

-Click- cool?

Xanthia

12:45:26 Vash | Xy

Xan
Glas to hear it
And oooo fun
It goes okay but excited to eat my food xD

12:45:12 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I'm sorry lol, at least we're suffering together

Faulty Demons

12:44:28 Ollie, Gold

Collar
Anyways haha
I'm going to do like a lizard/orc man with desert dystopian style clothing.

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01:34:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

I got a bucket of junk.

01:33:22 Many moons, one me

Anyone else have a deaf relative who refuses to put hearing aids in, starts a whole conversation, then gets frustrated cause they can't hear your response?

01:32:09 Winter

Owl
I thought you had no apples ?

Vax

01:21:47 a rock in your shoe

damn this game is weirdd

01:21:13 He/They pronouns

I hate drawing horses ToT

01:20:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I GOT A REALLY COOL EYE DYE!!!!!

01:18:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ima gamble with Bree the fox

Vax

01:15:52 a rock in your shoe

oh green guy is amazinger

o n e i r o

01:13:14 vaxs alt

im playing the freak circus for the first time the clown guy is amazing

01:11:21 Winter

Oops forgot to link -WP Click-

01:09:59 Winter

I feel like I should train her up battle because she no good for me other wise although she is a defect x boost

01:09:26 He/They pronouns

Release the babies! ToT

-WP Click-

01:03:42 Cyber / Onion

Star

Omg so sparkly xD

01:01:54

-WP Click- cool?

Xanthius

12:59:14 Xan

Vash
thats so real omg i cant wait to get home so i can eat some food

12:57:42 Cyber / Onion

-WP Click-
Another boost! The dry spell has ended

12:49:12

-Click- cool?

Xanthia

12:45:26 Vash | Xy

Xan
Glas to hear it
And oooo fun
It goes okay but excited to eat my food xD

12:45:12 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I'm sorry lol, at least we're suffering together

Faulty Demons

12:44:28 Ollie, Gold

Collar
Anyways haha
I'm going to do like a lizard/orc man with desert dystopian style clothing.

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM