| Heya! | January 9, 2022 09:40 PM |
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I just need to know of anything I can improve on! Older, non fixed, version.  --- Improved version. |
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| Heya! | January 9, 2022 10:14 PM |
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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair . i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs . and the nose is a lil eh |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 09:41 AM |
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los campesinos! said:
i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair . i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs . and the nose is a lil eh
I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲 What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺 |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 11:43 AM |
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I think the nose just blend's in too much. |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 11:44 AM |
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Revenge Full Of Lust said:
I think the nose just blend's in too much.
Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone. |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 11:48 AM |
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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading! The colour choice and the glow effects are grstuff cheeks, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.
Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop! |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 12:27 PM |
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Eternity said:
I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading! The colour choice and the glow effects are grstuff cheeks, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.
Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!
Thank you! I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper- |
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| Heya! | January 10, 2022 11:09 PM |
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Now she just looks like a thick calved gym bro EDIT: Fixed her... again- |
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| Heya! | January 11, 2022 12:22 PM |
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I think she looks grstuff cheeks. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick |
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| Heya! | January 11, 2022 12:23 PM |
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Vanilla Latte said:
I think she looks grstuff cheeks. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick
It's more of a style choice makin' them curvy! I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I appreciate it so so so much! <333 ^///^ |
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