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 Lucky Rat
12:14:26 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I remember watching wild little baby quail run outside of my old house, they look like little pin cones in the tall grass
 Lucky Rat
12:12:58 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Never mind lol
 Cypress Road
12:12:45 Axan hoarder
Quail
 Lucky Rat
11:43:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
What bird are they again?
 Cypress Road
11:38:34 Axan hoarder
They are so tiny I swear
 Lucky Rat
11:36:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
Awwww their adorable, like cute little puff balls
 Cypress Road
11:33:52 Axan hoarder
Don't mind the fact its on my footing had it in my hand and it kept trying to wiggle out so I put it on the floor and it climbed onto my foot and then another one stood chirping for me to take it out and immediately went on my foot and laid down by the one I was spoon feeding.
-Click-
-Click-
 Serpents
11:21:34 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
-WP Click- come please I need help
 Lucky Rat
11:19:11 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
The more and more you feed it, it will get stronger
 Lucky Rat
11:18:44 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
At least it’s eating ^^!
 Cypress Road
11:14:36 Axan hoarder
It is eating the mix i made it though but hasn't eaten enough and is very weak
 Lucky Rat
11:14:19 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
Aww poor thing 😢 I hope it gets better!
 Cypress Road
11:13:50 Axan hoarder
Its gonna be super attached to me if it does make it though. Hand fed babies always are.
 The Aura's
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Hey!
 Cypress Road
11:12:21 Axan hoarder
Im hoping its not a starve out and it will start eating on its own as i am a heavy sleeper and can't wake ever 1 to 2 hours to feed it. It had a difficult hatch and had curled toes which im currently fixing.
 Lucky Rat
11:08:42 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
My fingers are crossed
 Cypress Road
11:07:11 Axan hoarder
Yall one of my quail hasn't eaten or drank since getting moved from the incubator. The other 2 are fine. So I mixed some of its food with a little bit of water and im spoon feeding it. Fingers crossed.
 Serpents
11:07:02 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I use a name gen (for last names ) those stood out for ones Ill use either for new intakes and or ones with out names nor blood (as most will be infected with Snap blood)
 Moonfall
11:06:38 Many moons, one me
Byeeee
 Moonfall
11:06:31 Many moons, one me
Oh, right, book,
man I really got distracted there... Back to book now

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 Lucky Rat
12:14:26 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I remember watching wild little baby quail run outside of my old house, they look like little pin cones in the tall grass
 Lucky Rat
12:12:58 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Never mind lol
 Cypress Road
12:12:45 Axan hoarder
Quail
 Lucky Rat
11:43:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
What bird are they again?
 Cypress Road
11:38:34 Axan hoarder
They are so tiny I swear
 Lucky Rat
11:36:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
Awwww their adorable, like cute little puff balls
 Cypress Road
11:33:52 Axan hoarder
Don't mind the fact its on my footing had it in my hand and it kept trying to wiggle out so I put it on the floor and it climbed onto my foot and then another one stood chirping for me to take it out and immediately went on my foot and laid down by the one I was spoon feeding.
-Click-
-Click-
 Serpents
11:21:34 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
-WP Click- come please I need help
 Lucky Rat
11:19:11 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
The more and more you feed it, it will get stronger
 Lucky Rat
11:18:44 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
At least it’s eating ^^!
 Cypress Road
11:14:36 Axan hoarder
It is eating the mix i made it though but hasn't eaten enough and is very weak
 Lucky Rat
11:14:19 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
CR
Aww poor thing 😢 I hope it gets better!
 Cypress Road
11:13:50 Axan hoarder
Its gonna be super attached to me if it does make it though. Hand fed babies always are.
 The Aura's
11:12:51 Aura/Pea
Hey!
 Cypress Road
11:12:21 Axan hoarder
Im hoping its not a starve out and it will start eating on its own as i am a heavy sleeper and can't wake ever 1 to 2 hours to feed it. It had a difficult hatch and had curled toes which im currently fixing.
 Lucky Rat
11:08:42 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
My fingers are crossed
 Cypress Road
11:07:11 Axan hoarder
Yall one of my quail hasn't eaten or drank since getting moved from the incubator. The other 2 are fine. So I mixed some of its food with a little bit of water and im spoon feeding it. Fingers crossed.
 Serpents
11:07:02 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Moon I use a name gen (for last names ) those stood out for ones Ill use either for new intakes and or ones with out names nor blood (as most will be infected with Snap blood)
 Moonfall
11:06:38 Many moons, one me
Byeeee
 Moonfall
11:06:31 Many moons, one me
Oh, right, book,
man I really got distracted there... Back to book now




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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