Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
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Summer Month: 1 
Night 
Earthquake Moon: 
| Chatbox |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Moon I once tried to make scrambled eggs and somehow ended up making an omelet. Tried to recreate it multiple times, but it's never happened since. |
| Moonfall |
| I'm making 4 pancakes at once and I accidentally connected 2 of them |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Scorpion I kinda understand where some of them are coming from, what with the surge and influx in telemarketer calls and such. Other times people are just rude. |
| SouthernScorpion |
| I am *supposed* to note when they hang up as a mark on the profile for their fine determination, since the fine only affects buildings 20k sqft or higher, so at minimum its a 20k fine |
| SouthernScorpion |
| its a mandatory law they have to comply with , and I'm calling the people who aren't in compliance to let them know they will be fined if they aren't in compliance by a certain date/ I try to be nice and NOT add notes to their profiles that would adversely affect the fines, (between 1& sqft-5$sqft) but I'm really getting fed up with them hanging up on me |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| I hope I'm not coming off as bitchy to anyone; I just REALLY don't like this holiday. ~_~ |
| Owlstar |
| Petri my Oc can transform into a tiger sized winged cat or a humongous 8.5 or so foot tall wolf. She is a tri manifestier and her powers are shade fire and ice and she plays with everblaze and shadow flux. Not sure if you understand any of that but yeah. |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Scorpion Wait, call center or something similar? I hated my call center job. Not because of the people, the concept itself just kinda sucked. |
| Acerbus. |
| I think if there was an alien invasion I would simply find the nearest alien and tell them to end it now. No need to watch world domination xD |
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 | Grizzly Bear : +5 |
| Cougar : +5 |
| Bobcat : +5 |
| Chatbox |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Moon I once tried to make scrambled eggs and somehow ended up making an omelet. Tried to recreate it multiple times, but it's never happened since. |
| Moonfall |
| I'm making 4 pancakes at once and I accidentally connected 2 of them |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Scorpion I kinda understand where some of them are coming from, what with the surge and influx in telemarketer calls and such. Other times people are just rude. |
| SouthernScorpion |
| I am *supposed* to note when they hang up as a mark on the profile for their fine determination, since the fine only affects buildings 20k sqft or higher, so at minimum its a 20k fine |
| SouthernScorpion |
| its a mandatory law they have to comply with , and I'm calling the people who aren't in compliance to let them know they will be fined if they aren't in compliance by a certain date/ I try to be nice and NOT add notes to their profiles that would adversely affect the fines, (between 1& sqft-5$sqft) but I'm really getting fed up with them hanging up on me |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| I hope I'm not coming off as bitchy to anyone; I just REALLY don't like this holiday. ~_~ |
| Owlstar |
| Petri my Oc can transform into a tiger sized winged cat or a humongous 8.5 or so foot tall wolf. She is a tri manifestier and her powers are shade fire and ice and she plays with everblaze and shadow flux. Not sure if you understand any of that but yeah. |
| TheFlyingKitten |
| Scorpion Wait, call center or something similar? I hated my call center job. Not because of the people, the concept itself just kinda sucked. |
| Acerbus. |
| I think if there was an alien invasion I would simply find the nearest alien and tell them to end it now. No need to watch world domination xD |
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