Wolf Play : Critique?

it would be neat if less work for people to do meant more free time but for Some Reason we have it set up so that if there's not as much work for people to do we just starve.

Black Dawn Den

08:44:52 Dawn

Andy
Is that ai or is that yours?

Andypaws

08:44:01 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- ai sucks🗣

Black Dawn Den

08:42:19 Dawn

EoE
Exactly it makes my skin crawl.

Hollyleaf

08:41:08 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Cedar and Melanie of pack Luck geko🍀 play in the field together.
Stats: Social +1
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Eye of Eternity

08:40:45 tern | they/he

dawn
ew fuck that

Black Dawn Den

08:39:10 Dawn

Can't stand ai. It's taking over my job ;-;

Ezranian

08:38:19 ezra, he/him

Eye of Eternity

08:37:52 tern | they/he

oh i didnt even notice the ai in the thumbnail and apparently the channel refuses to address it never mind

Ezranian

08:36:27 ezra, he/him

tern-
oh real

Eye of Eternity

08:36:09 tern | they/he

i say watch i mean put on in the background and promptly tune out while i work

Eye of Eternity

08:35:49 tern | they/he

yknow what screw it im gonna watch an hour long video essay on freak shit i have free will

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Ezranian

08:52:58 ezra, he/him

tern-
yes Absolutely it does

Eye of Eternity

08:52:31 tern | they/he

i forgot to add the stars on his hat/robe but does this go hard -Click-

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08:51:50 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Tern,

I love drawing cats.

Dawn,

I have a few color variations of it ^^ -Click-

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08:47:23 Dawn

Andy
It's so cute!! I love the colors!

Eye of Eternity

08:46:41 tern | they/he

andy
awww kitty :0

Andypaws

08:45:32 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Dawn

Its mine ^^

Ezranian

08:44:55 ezra, he/him

it would be neat if less work for people to do meant more free time but for Some Reason we have it set up so that if there's not as much work for people to do we just starve.

Black Dawn Den

08:44:52 Dawn

Andy
Is that ai or is that yours?

Andypaws

08:44:01 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- ai sucks🗣

Black Dawn Den

08:42:19 Dawn

EoE
Exactly it makes my skin crawl.

Hollyleaf

08:41:08 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Cedar and Melanie of pack Luck geko🍀 play in the field together.
Stats: Social +1
Mood: Happy

Eye of Eternity

08:40:45 tern | they/he

dawn
ew fuck that

Black Dawn Den

08:39:10 Dawn

Can't stand ai. It's taking over my job ;-;

Ezranian

08:38:19 ezra, he/him

Eye of Eternity

08:37:52 tern | they/he

oh i didnt even notice the ai in the thumbnail and apparently the channel refuses to address it never mind

Ezranian

08:36:27 ezra, he/him

tern-
oh real

Eye of Eternity

08:36:09 tern | they/he

i say watch i mean put on in the background and promptly tune out while i work

Eye of Eternity

08:35:49 tern | they/he

yknow what screw it im gonna watch an hour long video essay on freak shit i have free will

Werewolf

08:30:57 Lycan, My can

Anyone up for a she ra or Harry Potter fandom romance role play?

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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