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02:40:11 Axan hoarder

How are you

02:40:02 Axan hoarder

Xy
Good. I missed you too. Had been super busy. I hatched 11 chickens and bought 9 so now have 20 and just hatched 3 quail so I have 10 quail now and im about to move to 30 acres of land

02:37:54 Many moons, one me

Of course! Anytime!

02:36:38 renee

@Moonfall
thank you!! <3

02:36:17 Vash | Xy

how are you? ive missed you<3

02:35:24 Axan hoarder

02:35:08 Axan hoarder

My xyxy. XD

02:34:47 Vash | Xy

my cycy<333

02:31:52 Axan hoarder

I just bred all my wolves again finally.
Also im so happy all 3 of my quail made it through the night. Now just gotta wait til they are nice and fluffy and waiting for one to have their toes uncurl

02:26:26 renee

-WP Click-
waiting on her pups </3

02:24:20 Axan hoarder

I need more axanthics. Mine are all old.

02:23:52 Many moons, one me

Btw, aren't Virginia au Augustus and Mustang the same person? (It's been a minute so I'm trying to remember)

Imladris

02:23:40

Wow, my starter alphas just threw a random Gaelic Blood boost pup... o.O
Do you call that lucky or what x')
-WP Click-

02:22:13 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
I love it! I need to read the last 2 books and they're finally almost ready to borrow. I mean, book 6 has been ready for ages but I want to read book 5 before 6

02:17:13 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm hopping off to watch tv bye, see you guys later

02:16:54 Axan hoarder

I spy a xyxy

02:13:12 NRC/Night/Raven

Eve
Pretty

Lucky Rat

02:10:29 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Megan
Yeah^x^

Hallow's Eve

02:10:27 Hallow, Eve

-WP Click-
I can't wait for her pups 0^0

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02:46:42 Sirens Alluring

Andd now I wait :') I love waiting </3

02:40:11 Axan hoarder

How are you

02:40:02 Axan hoarder

Xy
Good. I missed you too. Had been super busy. I hatched 11 chickens and bought 9 so now have 20 and just hatched 3 quail so I have 10 quail now and im about to move to 30 acres of land

02:37:54 Many moons, one me

Of course! Anytime!

02:36:38 renee

@Moonfall
thank you!! <3

02:36:17 Vash | Xy

how are you? ive missed you<3

02:35:24 Axan hoarder

02:35:08 Axan hoarder

My xyxy. XD

02:34:47 Vash | Xy

my cycy<333

02:31:52 Axan hoarder

I just bred all my wolves again finally.
Also im so happy all 3 of my quail made it through the night. Now just gotta wait til they are nice and fluffy and waiting for one to have their toes uncurl

02:26:26 renee

-WP Click-
waiting on her pups </3

02:24:20 Axan hoarder

I need more axanthics. Mine are all old.

02:23:52 Many moons, one me

Btw, aren't Virginia au Augustus and Mustang the same person? (It's been a minute so I'm trying to remember)

Imladris

02:23:40

Wow, my starter alphas just threw a random Gaelic Blood boost pup... o.O
Do you call that lucky or what x')
-WP Click-

02:22:13 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
I love it! I need to read the last 2 books and they're finally almost ready to borrow. I mean, book 6 has been ready for ages but I want to read book 5 before 6

02:17:13 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I'm hopping off to watch tv bye, see you guys later

02:16:54 Axan hoarder

I spy a xyxy

02:13:12 NRC/Night/Raven

Eve
Pretty

Lucky Rat

02:10:29 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Megan
Yeah^x^

Hallow's Eve

02:10:27 Hallow, Eve

-WP Click-
I can't wait for her pups 0^0

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM