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11:54:41 Sunnyy

hi chat

11:54:35 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Rook yeah I have two actually lol

4ever
We have cheekywanker and spooky bitch

11:53:31 Kneecap stealer

A catto

11:52:42 Kneecap stealer

My ghost is a furry beast :D

11:52:11 Rook

Wait how are yall getting ghosts I want one

11:52:03 Kneecap stealer

Mine is named Lilith

11:51:53 Kneecap stealer

I have a room ghost too

11:51:23 Rook

Lucky Rat
You have a room ghost? :o

11:51:20 Kneecap stealer

Pretty girl

11:50:59 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ugh my room ghost needs to stop trying to scare me it’s just annoying me |:<

11:49:46 Rook

Sleep
Look I customised this girl :3
-WP Click-

11:49:43 Kneecap stealer

I have a single jasmine no one has wanted to buy for decades

11:49:19 Rook

don't tempt me with jasmines I swear

11:48:05 Kneecap stealer

All I need is a few apples to get some fertility figurines

11:47:44 Kneecap stealer

For me this is mass breeding

11:46:48 Kneecap stealer

I have no use for it and I have like 4 or 5 pregnant females 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

11:46:15 Kneecap stealer

Then you might want my jasmine LMAO

11:45:56 Rook

Sleep
I am back to mass breeding lol

11:45:32 Kneecap stealer

That zebra is so cute what-

11:44:59 Kneecap stealer

Sabbath why do I have a sneaky sussy you mass bred again >.>

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Crimson Eclipse

11:54:41 Sunnyy

hi chat

11:54:35 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Rook yeah I have two actually lol

4ever
We have cheekywanker and spooky bitch

11:53:31 Kneecap stealer

A catto

11:52:42 Kneecap stealer

My ghost is a furry beast :D

11:52:11 Rook

Wait how are yall getting ghosts I want one

11:52:03 Kneecap stealer

Mine is named Lilith

11:51:53 Kneecap stealer

I have a room ghost too

11:51:23 Rook

Lucky Rat
You have a room ghost? :o

11:51:20 Kneecap stealer

Pretty girl

11:50:59 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ugh my room ghost needs to stop trying to scare me it’s just annoying me |:<

11:49:46 Rook

Sleep
Look I customised this girl :3
-WP Click-

11:49:43 Kneecap stealer

I have a single jasmine no one has wanted to buy for decades

11:49:19 Rook

don't tempt me with jasmines I swear

11:48:05 Kneecap stealer

All I need is a few apples to get some fertility figurines

11:47:44 Kneecap stealer

For me this is mass breeding

11:46:48 Kneecap stealer

I have no use for it and I have like 4 or 5 pregnant females 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

11:46:15 Kneecap stealer

Then you might want my jasmine LMAO

11:45:56 Rook

Sleep
I am back to mass breeding lol

11:45:32 Kneecap stealer

That zebra is so cute what-

11:44:59 Kneecap stealer

Sabbath why do I have a sneaky sussy you mass bred again >.>

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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