Wolf Play : Critique please!

12:18:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a bit to get ready for bed

Destinations End

12:16:08 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

12:15:36 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone got any shifter/hybrid forms for ocs pm me (all but one will be an elemental if it helps powers are
Ash
Astral
Vapor
Sand
Glass
and magma
pm me please

12:15:15 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

what sounds cool for an oc design (eye/left side of face ) smoke leaking from the eye either wide opened or slit smoke/other ghostly thing falling from the eye, pupil looks like a ghost, no scalera, other(pm me) for face glowing marks, bits are translucent ill take ideas just pm me ,

Ezranian

12:11:33 ezra, he/him

well i turned in Something for my rough draft! but also now i am caffeinated and cant sleep lol

11:56:34 Kneecap stealer

Cream mocha?

Sabbath

11:56:04 Rook

any name ideas, chat?
-WP Click-

11:54:45 Boe

Hi Khaos xD
Yeah I'm doing alright lol
It's been a bit I guess ^^" not sure if I'm going to stick around for too long but for now I'm kind of back for a bit lol

Snow Song

11:54:33 Song

I don't know when to use sales chat for questions
Please advise
Selling stuff, advertising amerc i know goes in sales
I have been told i can ask pricing questions here (after I asked them in sales first)
What things of the more ambiguous nature belong in sales?

11:53:39 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing! I was just thinking about you yesterday. I can't stay in chat long, but I hope you're doing well. ^^

11:52:32 Boe

Hey Apothecary ^^

11:50:56 Kneecap stealer

Diamond is ugly on spectre

Apothecary

11:49:59 Medicinally Autistic

I'd rather we didn't talk about sales in main chat :)

11:39:51 Kneecap stealer

Everyone makes that mistake sometimes, even I still do, and I'm sure khaos does too lmao

11:39:39

ok thank you!!

11:39:13

ok i found it! nevermind. it is there after all

11:38:01 Kaos || Kháos

As for the other dyes, doesn't seem like there's a guide for them yet.

Eye of Eternity

11:38:01 tern | they/he

zefhyr
the eye colour doesnt show up well on some poses, try changing that
and it should be in customs, just search for the name of the dye in the base pelt section

11:37:12 Kaos || Kháos

There's a guide for crystallines, but it's not too accurate / detailed at the moment. When I'm done going through my class notes for the night (223 pages </3), I'll look at updating it a bit. ^^

Guide: -WP Click-

11:36:59

i used 'solar flare' but it doesnt show at all. i want totry basecoat dyes but need toknow what they look like. i tried the customs page, but there is no option to see what dye or deco looks like. that must have changed.

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12:18:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a bit to get ready for bed

Destinations End

12:16:08 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

12:15:36 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone got any shifter/hybrid forms for ocs pm me (all but one will be an elemental if it helps powers are
Ash
Astral
Vapor
Sand
Glass
and magma
pm me please

12:15:15 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Ezranian

12:11:33 ezra, he/him

well i turned in Something for my rough draft! but also now i am caffeinated and cant sleep lol

11:56:34 Kneecap stealer

Cream mocha?

Sabbath

11:56:04 Rook

any name ideas, chat?
-WP Click-

11:54:45 Boe

Hi Khaos xD
Yeah I'm doing alright lol
It's been a bit I guess ^^" not sure if I'm going to stick around for too long but for now I'm kind of back for a bit lol

Snow Song

11:54:33 Song

11:53:39 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing! I was just thinking about you yesterday. I can't stay in chat long, but I hope you're doing well. ^^

11:52:32 Boe

Hey Apothecary ^^

11:50:56 Kneecap stealer

Diamond is ugly on spectre

Apothecary

11:49:59 Medicinally Autistic

I'd rather we didn't talk about sales in main chat :)

11:39:51 Kneecap stealer

Everyone makes that mistake sometimes, even I still do, and I'm sure khaos does too lmao

11:39:39

ok thank you!!

11:39:13

ok i found it! nevermind. it is there after all

11:38:01 Kaos || Kháos

As for the other dyes, doesn't seem like there's a guide for them yet.

Eye of Eternity

11:38:01 tern | they/he

zefhyr
the eye colour doesnt show up well on some poses, try changing that
and it should be in customs, just search for the name of the dye in the base pelt section

11:37:12 Kaos || Kháos

11:36:59

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April 21, 2020 04:23 PM

Wings57

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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!

I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!

April 21, 2020 05:14 PM

Former Pack

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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^

April 21, 2020 05:17 PM

Former Pack

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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.

April 21, 2020 05:20 PM

Wings57

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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!

April 21, 2020 05:33 PM

Reathmuaz

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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil