Wolf Play : Critique

12:09:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Fuck yeah the rat is back in its former glory!!!

12:08:48 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Ok!

12:08:10 Kneecap stealer

Ok just wanted to see, now I can focus on my things

12:07:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Yes two things why?

12:06:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
But you should go to better one if you want a good impression, Crystal hot springs wasn’t as Crystal it had some random hair and bugs in the water, so maybe you can go to lava hot springs I haven’t been there yet but we might go this summer

12:05:11 Kneecap stealer

Rat

Do you have the thing you want from the event shop yet or no?

12:02:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah you should

12:01:13 Many moons, one me

Lucky
That actually sounds relaxing actually, I should add that to my wishlist

12:00:11 Many moons, one me

Jay
That's so sad!! I'm grateful the last time I went on hiatus I had one whole wolf left from my alpha line

12:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I am back from the hot springs ^x^ I went to crystal hot springs today and it was kinda nice (besides me occasionally accidentally gulping up vary salty water XD, and almost drowning because my sister jumped on my back when I was relaxed) other then that it was a nice time to unplug and just wash away my seasonal depression

11:56:36 Jay [They/She]

thank you Moon!
All my wolves died, so I bought new ones and gotta try and get good explore wolves again D:

11:55:57 Many moons, one me

That figures, sleep goes offline once I finally figure out photos

11:55:10 Many moons, one me

Hey sleepy, welcome back!

11:52:56 Jay [They/She]

heyo, im alive! I play this game off and on lol

11:49:52 Many moons, one me

Thank you andy, they're so sweet, but also buttholes

11:43:45 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Awww theyre adorable

11:42:07 Many moons, one me

Yay!!

Ok, so the black and white one is thumbs, he has extra toes where thumbs would be and multicolored beans.
The orange one is ginger, she steals thumbs' treats all the freaking time. She's the one that bites when I'm frustrated

11:40:26 Many moons, one me

You know what, fudge this, my profile ain't cooperating, so chat it is. Please don't strike me mods, I'm figuring this out and let me know if I mess up
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Let's see if this works this time

Caeruleum

11:28:35 Caesar

Pretty pretty dud
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11:28:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Ive never had an issue with gifyu

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12:09:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Fuck yeah the rat is back in its former glory!!!

12:08:48 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Ok!

12:08:10 Kneecap stealer

Ok just wanted to see, now I can focus on my things

12:07:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Yes two things why?

12:06:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

12:05:11 Kneecap stealer

Rat

Do you have the thing you want from the event shop yet or no?

12:02:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah you should

12:01:13 Many moons, one me

Lucky
That actually sounds relaxing actually, I should add that to my wishlist

12:00:11 Many moons, one me

Jay
That's so sad!! I'm grateful the last time I went on hiatus I had one whole wolf left from my alpha line

12:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

11:56:36 Jay [They/She]

thank you Moon!
All my wolves died, so I bought new ones and gotta try and get good explore wolves again D:

11:55:57 Many moons, one me

That figures, sleep goes offline once I finally figure out photos

11:55:10 Many moons, one me

Hey sleepy, welcome back!

11:52:56 Jay [They/She]

heyo, im alive! I play this game off and on lol

11:49:52 Many moons, one me

Thank you andy, they're so sweet, but also buttholes

11:43:45 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Awww theyre adorable

11:42:07 Many moons, one me

11:40:26 Many moons, one me

Caeruleum

11:28:35 Caesar

Pretty pretty dud
-WP Click-

11:28:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Ive never had an issue with gifyu

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM