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08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

Willow moonlight

08:15:19

Ok

08:14:09 Pack of Sharp Snap

Full Moon Celebration. Starts every month on the 5th.

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Willow moonlight

08:12:41

What is FMC

08:10:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

You can't change allegiances during the FMC

08:07:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Flower
Could ask the mods again?

Willow moonlight

08:06:44

How do I change to a dark seeker

Willow moonlight

08:05:05

Good

Willow moonlight

08:05:01

Oh god idea

Willow moonlight

08:04:22

I finally got out of bed but I’m going to hunt Easter eggs in a bit

08:04:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I say no but I do have beef with church sooooo yeah

08:03:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I might just change my name for my favorite holiday instead of every one, I’ll just change my flag colors

08:02:15 Kneecap stealer

Still debating on wether or not to go to church

08:00:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Feiella
Yeah

07:59:16 Pack of Sharp Snap

Rat
Good to see you have your name back :)

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08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

Willow moonlight

08:15:19

Ok

08:14:09 Pack of Sharp Snap

Full Moon Celebration. Starts every month on the 5th.

The news page will show it when you log in

Willow moonlight

08:12:41

What is FMC

08:10:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

You can't change allegiances during the FMC

08:07:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Flower
Could ask the mods again?

Willow moonlight

08:06:44

How do I change to a dark seeker

Willow moonlight

08:05:05

Good

Willow moonlight

08:05:01

Oh god idea

Willow moonlight

08:04:22

I finally got out of bed but I’m going to hunt Easter eggs in a bit

08:04:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I say no but I do have beef with church sooooo yeah

08:03:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I might just change my name for my favorite holiday instead of every one, I’ll just change my flag colors

08:02:15 Kneecap stealer

Still debating on wether or not to go to church

08:00:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Feiella
Yeah

07:59:16 Pack of Sharp Snap

Rat
Good to see you have your name back :)

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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