Wolf Play : Critique?

Well so long as all of them make it through the night I have 3 baby quail to raise and add to my flock bringing my total up to 10. Definitely gonna need to get more as I have twice as many chickens right now but that will be after I move.

Cypress Road

01:27:21 Axan hoarder

I havent blacked out or almost blacked out in years and I just almost did while holding one of my baby quail cause it was bleeding and I was stressed trying to get it to stop.

Moonfall

01:21:30 Many moons, one me

Good night everyone

Moonfall

01:20:14 Many moons, one me

You know what sleep, I'll give em to you whenever you're ready, and I'm going to snooze before I drop my phone

Moonfall

01:17:14 Many moons, one me

Thanks sleep let me know when

Night Raven College

01:16:38 NRC/Night/Raven

Yes! 16/100 eggs I'm getting closer

Sleep

01:16:10 Kneecap stealer

Imma plug in my phone

Sleep

01:15:07 Kneecap stealer

Cuz if I eventually breed over 1000+T and 310T the pups are bound to have over 1k talent

Sleep

01:14:27 Kneecap stealer

I can probably take pup 50 off your hands (or paws xD) mainly cuz of the ears, and 310 talent

Sleep

01:12:54 Kneecap stealer

I need to turn spectre male so we can breed them xD

Moonfall

01:12:10 Many moons, one me

I mean, probably would have been better had I put a red fern on her but I'm ok with this. Problem is I don't know who to keep and I can only keep 1.
Bright side is I have a minimum of 77 hours to figure that out

Sleep

01:11:52 Kneecap stealer

Damn, barley likes their father but loves their mother😂😂😂😂

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02:29:19 NRC/Night/Raven

Guess you'll just have to wait and see

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I hop not ugh I really don’t want her too im ready for the pups now

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Kitty
She might go for 100 hours

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Ugh y’all galaxy has been pregnant now 90 hours and won’t go into labor

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My funds are lacking right now D: I really need to start exploring.

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I'm gonna have to start training new explore teams >-<

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@Cypress Road
awe, that sounds so cool

Cypress Road

01:42:57 Axan hoarder

Cypress Road

01:27:21 Axan hoarder

I havent blacked out or almost blacked out in years and I just almost did while holding one of my baby quail cause it was bleeding and I was stressed trying to get it to stop.

Moonfall

01:21:30 Many moons, one me

Good night everyone

Moonfall

01:20:14 Many moons, one me

You know what sleep, I'll give em to you whenever you're ready, and I'm going to snooze before I drop my phone

Moonfall

01:17:14 Many moons, one me

Thanks sleep let me know when

Night Raven College

01:16:38 NRC/Night/Raven

Yes! 16/100 eggs I'm getting closer

Sleep

01:16:10 Kneecap stealer

Imma plug in my phone

Sleep

01:15:07 Kneecap stealer

Cuz if I eventually breed over 1000+T and 310T the pups are bound to have over 1k talent

Sleep

01:14:27 Kneecap stealer

I can probably take pup 50 off your hands (or paws xD) mainly cuz of the ears, and 310 talent

Sleep

01:12:54 Kneecap stealer

I need to turn spectre male so we can breed them xD

Moonfall

01:12:10 Many moons, one me

Sleep

01:11:52 Kneecap stealer

Damn, barley likes their father but loves their mother😂😂😂😂

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

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July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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